+TODO (mostly from Tue 20 Feb WRITING COACH SESSION)—
+* expand on sticker wrongness
+* draft and inject new sentences/paragraphs on—
+ * Lewontin's fallacy/multidimensional intuition
+ * http://johnsalvatier.org/blog/2017/reality-has-a-surprising-amount-of-detail
+ * http://lesswrong.com/lw/xe/changing_emotions/
+ * it shouldn't be surprising to sciencey ppl that biology is real
+ * practical stakes (think of the children)
+ * nonbinary
+ * trans women are beautiful and great, but it's not the _same thing_
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+/2017/Dec/theres-a-land-that-i-see-or-the-spirit-of-intervention/
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+BUFFERED—
+* one more evidence of Norton's confusion
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+* dying civilization, poison
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+* crime and sex orientation stats
+ * "Long-Term Follow-Up of Transsexual Persons Undergoing Sex Reassignment Surgery: Cohort Study in Sweden" PLOS One by Cecilia Dhejne, Paul Lichtenstein, Marcus Boman, Anna L. V. Johansson, Niklas Långström, Mikael Landén
+ * http://journals.plos.org/plosone/article?id=10.1371/journal.pone.0016885
+ * Adjusted (for psychiatric and immigrant status) Hazard Ratios: 0.8 against cis male controls, 18.1 against female controls See Tables S1 and S2 in the supporting information.
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+HARDER TO APPLY—
+* can function socially as men
+* coach's map example
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FULL OUTLINE—
* Scott says category boundaries aren't true or false; you can group whales with other sea-dwelling animals if you want
* Sure, this is a great motte
REMAINING POINTS—
-* better phrasing: other than the desire to be female, AGPs don't have an unusual number of female-typical traits
-* (say) Caitlyn Jenner and Janet Mock don't _look_ like the same thing
-* you can define categories how you want, but they have consequences
* the reason it _matters_ that people already have a concept for male because of the high-dimensionality, which my diagram can't express, but intution can
* passing is _hard_
-* link /2018/Feb/blegg-mode/
-* link http://johnsalvatier.org/blog/2017/reality-has-a-surprising-amount-of-detail
-* link http://lesswrong.com/lw/xe/changing_emotions/
* the mismatch gets _worse_ with less gatekeeping
* "gay" trans women are etiologically straight
* weird social taboos, stickers