_ footnote explaining quibbles? (the first time I tried to write this, I hesitated, not sure if necessary)
_ "it was the same thing here"—most readers are not going to understand what I see as the obvious analogy
_ first mention of Jack G. should introduce him properly
_ footnote explaining quibbles? (the first time I tried to write this, I hesitated, not sure if necessary)
_ "it was the same thing here"—most readers are not going to understand what I see as the obvious analogy
_ first mention of Jack G. should introduce him properly