X-Git-Url: http://unremediatedgender.space/source?a=blobdiff_plain;ds=sidebyside;f=notes%2Fmemoir-sections.md;h=9ede28399f357d767375e3a7098d5b96512e18e5;hb=87b99b9792a15c42233e1cf7ea5ffbffb9f2de2b;hp=55749b58593959c838822f86e139f3614bc52914;hpb=a2ca8ef1fde9054ba8cc5a3d3b3180a0d8a0f3a4;p=Ultimately_Untrue_Thought.git diff --git a/notes/memoir-sections.md b/notes/memoir-sections.md index 55749b5..9ede283 100644 --- a/notes/memoir-sections.md +++ b/notes/memoir-sections.md @@ -20,17 +20,24 @@ pt. 3 edit tier— ✓ we can go stronger than "I definitely don't think Yudkowsky thinks of himself ✓ cut words from December 2019 blogging spree ✓ mention "Darkest Timeline" and Skyrms somewhere - -pt. 3 content fills— +✓ "Not the Incentives"—rewrite given that I'm not shielding Ray ✓ the skeptical family friend's view ✓ in a footnote, defend the "cutting my dick off" rhetorical flourish +✓ "admit that you are in fact adding a bit of autobiography to the memoir." +✓ anyone who drives at all +✓ clarify that can't remember details: "everyone else seemed to agree on things" +✓ "It's not just talking hypothetically, it is specifically calling a bluff, the point of the hypothetical" +✓ the history of civil rights +✓ it's not obvious why you can't recommend "What You Can't Say" +✓ Ben on "locally coherent coordination" don't unattributedly quote + +_ "it might matter timelessly" → there are people with AI chops who are PC (/2017/Jan/from-what-ive-tasted-of-desire/) _ confusing people and ourselves about what the exact crime is _ footnote explaining quibbles on clarification -_ FTX validated Ben's view of EA!! +_ FTX validated Ben's view of EA!! ("systematically conflating corruption, accumulation of dominance, and theft, with getting things done") +_ "your failure to model social reality is believing people when they claim noble motives" +_ hint at Vanessa being trans -pt. 3 minor— -✓ "Not the Incentives"—rewrite given that I'm not shielding Ray -_ Ben on "locally coherent coordination": use direct quotes for Ben's language—maybe rewrite in my own language (footnote?) as an understanding test _ do I have a better identifier than "Vassarite"? _ maybe I do want to fill in a few more details about the Sasha disaster, conditional on what I end up writing regarding Scott's prosecution?—and conditional on my separate retro email—also the Zolpidem thing _ link to protest flyer @@ -50,6 +57,7 @@ _ mention Nick Bostrom email scandal (and his not appearing on the one-sentence _ revise and cut words from "bad faith" section since can link to "Assume Bad Faith" _ cut words from January 2020 Twitter exchange (after war criminal defenses) _ everyone *who matters* prefers to stay on the good side +_ if you only say good things about Republican candidates pt. 5 edit tier— _ quote specific exchange where I mentioned 10,000 words of philosophy that Scott was wrong—obviously the wrong play @@ -104,6 +112,9 @@ _ Keltham's section in dath ilan ancillary _ objections and replies in dath ilan ancillary _ kitchen knife section in dath ilan ancillary +pt. 6 edit tier— +_ coach suggests, "Arguably this doesn't count as punishment for the same reason we don't say we're "punishing" a rabid animal by euthanizing it: it's not about disincentivizing the behaviour." + dath ilan ancillary tier— _ Who are the 9 most important legislators called? _ collect Earth people sneers