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@@ -12,6 +12,6 @@ It was time for the Gender Queery discussion group at the Q Center to begin. The
 
 When the circle got around to Mark, he kept silent as Caleb began to narrate: "Ever since puberty, he had fantasized about being more like the women he loved and admired. In a world teeming with the wonders of modern science, _fantasy_ becomes _reality_ ..."
 
-Mark stood up and said proudly, "My name is Taylor Saotome-Westlake, my pronouns are _he_/_him_, and as of last week, I am—" he lifted up the side of his shirt a few inches to reveal the estradiol patch, as Caleb finished:
+Mark stood up and said proudly, "My name is Taylor Saotome-Westlake, my pronouns are _he_/_him_—if only becuase I don't model myself as having a choice in the matter—and as of last week, I am—" he lifted up the side of his shirt a few inches to reveal the estradiol patch, as Caleb finished:
 
 "_The man with the nonstandard hormone balance!_"