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-"Mark, you look ... different," Alexa says.
+"Mark, I can't quite place it, but you look ... _different_ somehow," says Alexa.
 
-"Oh, I'm experimenting with a nonstandard hormone balance! It's kind of like being transgender, but without the part where you delusionally claim to be a woman," I say.
+"Oh, yes, I'm experimenting with a nonstandard hormone balance. It's kind of like being transgender, but without the part where you delusionally claim to be a woman."
 
 "What?"