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diff --git a/content/drafts/estranged-family.md b/content/drafts/estranged-family.md
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--- a/content/drafts/estranged-family.md
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@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Category: fiction
 Tags: cathartic, autogynephilia
 Status: draft
 
-"How was your trip?"
+"How was your trip?" I ask.
 
 "_Ugh._ The hotel I was in was hosting a _furry_ convention. Who do those perverts think they are, parading around their fetish in public?"
 
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ Status: draft
 
 "What?"
 
-"You're a _lesbian trans woman_."
+"Alexa, you're a _lesbian trans woman_."
 
 "So?"