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-"I think that if you crossdress, or if you kink on trans stuff, or you show _any signs_ of egghood, you _need_ to marry someone who is okay with you eventually transitioning. Not because you definitely will transition! But because it is _likely enough_ that you need to _plan_ for it."
+"I think that if show any signs of [egghood](https://archive.is/pp6Sa), you _need_ to marry someone who's okay with you eventually transitioning. Not because you _necessarily_ will, but because it's _likely_ enough that you need to _plan_ for it."
 
-"I probably don't actually _disagree_. Keeping promises is very important—
-But in the spirit of [Policy Debates Should Not Appear One-Sided](TODO: linky), I would like to register a note of sadness that we're are effectively thereby saying 'eggs don't deserve love.'"
+"I probably don't actually _disagree_. Keeping promises is very important. What a betrayal it would be—to take someone to have and to hold, for better or for worse, for richer or for poorer, in sickness and in health—
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+/2017/Dec/lesser-known-demand-curves/
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+But in the spirit of [Policy Debates Should Not Appear One-Sided](https://www.lesswrong.com/posts/PeSzc9JTBxhaYRp9b/policy-debates-should-not-appear-one-sided), I would like to register a note of sadness that we're effectively thereby saying 'eggs don't deserve love.'"
 
 "Eggs can have love, they just add a constraint."