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diff --git a/content/drafts/there-should-be-a-closetspace-lease-bound-crossover-fic.md b/content/drafts/there-should-be-a-closetspace-lease-bound-crossover-fic.md
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@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Category: other
 Tags: review (webcomic/graphic novel)
 Status: draft
 
-I want to use the platform of my comparatively ("comparatively") obscure blog to tell you about two comparatively obscure webcomics I like, whose readerships probably anti-correlate—overlapping less than two _arbitrary_ webcomics of similar comparative obscurity.
+I want to use the platform of my comparatively ("comparatively") obscure blog to tell you about two comparatively obscure webcomics I like that display some striking parallels, and whose readerships probably anti-correlate—overlapping less than two _arbitrary_ webcomics of similar comparative obscurity.
 
 _Closetspace_
 
@@ -52,9 +52,11 @@ visit from niece/aunt http://www.dolari.org/cs/215.htm http://www.dolari.org/cs/
 "Chromosome" http://www.dolari.org/cs/232.htm (Actually, they're both right! The SRY gene is the active part of the Y chromosome)
 pseudo-androphilia! http://www.dolari.org/cs/239.htm
 "We're both crossdressers, and we aren't anything like drag queens [...] someone like me. Someone like you"!! http://www.dolari.org/cs/268.htm 
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-bookmark (I'm most of the way through): http://www.dolari.org/cs/282.htm
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+Allison is only three years in http://www.dolari.org/cs/317.htm
+"in Thailand, no questions asked" http://www.dolari.org/cs/320.htm
+ambiguity on what "Carrie" means!! (Carol vs. Carolyn this is actually relevant to me) http://www.dolari.org/cs/326.htm
+nine months http://www.dolari.org/cs/332.htm
+guest illustrator gave Carrie a more realistic face http://www.dolari.org/cs/357.htm
 
 _Lease Bound_