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+> _There's a land that I see  
+> Where the children are free  
+> And I say it ain't far  
+> To this land from where we are_
+>
+> —"Free To Be ... You and Me"
+
 > If you want to make your stupid dream real, you need to have a realistic picture of the world. If you want a society in which men and women have the same brain, or one in which feminism actually works, you would have to _make it so_, with advanced biological engineering. John Varley writes fiction: so did Joanna Russ. 
 >
 > —[Greg Cochran](https://westhunt.wordpress.com/2015/12/12/internal-contradictions/)
@@ -37,7 +44,7 @@ out of the three women present—
 —they're _all_ trans, and _none_ of them come _close_ to passing. 
 
 
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+Maybe [Good Is Dumb](http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/GoodIsDumb) doesn't have to be [Truth in Television](http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TruthInTelevision).
 
 _I want to make the stupid dream real._ But to _get_ to the good world—whatever you think that is—