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 > —"Fifteen Minutes" by Mike Kroll
 
-A big part of my reasoning for [not staying on HRT](/2017/Sep/hormones-day-156-developments-doubts-and-pulling-the-plug-or-putting-the-cis-in-decision/) was generic concern about generic long-term health outcomes.
+Part of my reasoning for [not staying on HRT](/2017/Sep/hormones-day-156-developments-doubts-and-pulling-the-plug-or-putting-the-cis-in-decision/) was generic concern about generic long-term health outcomes.
 
 
-The human male body is not _designed_
+The human male body is not _designed_ 
 
 
 https://www.nickbostrom.com/evolution.pdf