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@@ -6,8 +6,7 @@ pt. 3 edit tier—
 ✓ quote Yudkowsky's LW moderation policy
 ✓ hint at "Yes Requires" objector being trans
 ✓ quote Jack on timelines anxiety
-_ confusing people and ourselves about what the exact crime is
-_ FTX validated Ben's view of EA!! ("systematically conflating corruption, accumulation of dominance, and theft, with getting things done")
+- nuance and FTX epilogue
 _ clarify "A Lesson is Learned"
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 _ being friends with dogs (it's good, but do I have the wordcount budget?)
@@ -94,6 +93,7 @@ things to discuss with Michael/Ben/Jessica—
 _ Anna on Paul Graham
 _ Yudkowsky thinking reasoning wasn't useful
 _ Jessica brought up race & IQ (she skimmed the previous draft, so I should highlight this)
+_ FTX and nuance epilogue (new)
 _ Michael's SLAPP against REACH (new)
 _ Michael on creepy and crazy men (new)
 _ elided Sasha disaster (new)