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-first edit pass bookmark: "I got a chance to talk to"
-
 time-sensitive globals TODOs—
-✓ address red team objections to pt. 3
-✓ schedule Friendship Day at Valinor
-✓ apply pro edits to pt. 3
-✓ address auto edit tier to pt. 3
-✓ clear with Alicorn
-✓ fill in needed pt. 4 sections
-✓ send pt. 4 to editors
-✓ clear with Kelsey
-✓ rephrase "everyone-yelling operation" in pt. 5
-✓ clear with Michael/Ben/Jessica
-✓ Kelsey won't elaborate on statutes of limitations
-✓ clear with Steven
-✓ revise gender section
-✓ finish and ship "Hrunkner Unnerby"
-
-- consult Anna
-- revise FTX footnote
-- consult Said
-
-_ finish and ship "Reply to Scott on Autogenderphilia"
-
-_ clear with Ray
-_ clear with Ruby
-
-_ SHIP PT. 3!!
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-
-_ finish pt. 5
+✓ apply pro edit pt. 4
+✓ section headers for pt. 4
+✓ apply red team pt. 4
+_ rewrite pt. 4
+_ consult Anna
+_ consult Said
+_ publish pt. 4
 
-_ apply red team pt. 4
-_ apply pro edit pt. 4
 
+_ finish pt. 5
 _ address auto edit tier to pt. 5
 _ solicit red team pt. 5
 _ solicit pro edit pt. 5
@@ -74,7 +50,7 @@ _ breakup song
 _ being friends with dogs (it's good, but do I have the wordcount budget?)
 _ mention that I was miffed about "Boundaries?" not getting Curated, while one of Euk's animal posts did
 _ explicitly mention http://benjaminrosshoffman.com/bad-faith-behavior-not-feeling/
-_ meeting with Ray (maybe?)
+_ meeting with Ray (6/29)
 _ mention Said rigor check somewhere, nervousness about Michael's gang being a mini-egregore
 _ I should respond to Ziz's charges that my criticism of concept-policing was a form of concept-policing
 _ Anna's claim that Scott was a target specifically because he was good, my counterclaim that payment can't be impunity
@@ -100,11 +76,14 @@ pt. 4 edit tier—
 ✓ if you only say good things about Republican candidates
 ✓ he used to be worthy of trust
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+_ look for a place to link "Faction formation"
+_ Tail's objection to FFS example
 _ the mailing list post noted it as a "common sexual fantasy"
 _ Sept. 2020 clarification noted that a distinction should be made between
 _ emphasize that 2018 thread was policing TERF-like pronoun usage, not just disapproving of gender-based pronouns
 _ https://cognition.cafe/p/on-lies-and-liars
 _ cite more sneers; use a footnote to pack in as many as possible
+_ Dawkins and Jerry Coyne
 
 
 pt. 5 edit tier—
@@ -1426,6 +1405,7 @@ It even leaked into Big Yud!!! "Counterfactuals were made for humanity, not huma
 At least I don't have to link the rebuttal myself every time:
 https://www.datasecretslox.com/index.php/topic,1553.msg38755.html
 https://old.reddit.com/r/slatestarcodex/comments/10vx6gk/the_categories_were_made_for_man_not_man_for_the/j7k8fjc/
+https://twitter.com/niplav_site/status/1744304380503904616
 
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@@ -2865,3 +2845,15 @@ The man rewrote had rewritten my personality over the internet. Everything I do,
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 https://forum.effectivealtruism.org/posts/kuqgJDPF6nfscSZsZ/thread-for-discussing-bostrom-s-email-and-apology?commentId=Z7kyiPAfmtztueFFJ
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+----
+
+"there just wasn't any reliable similarity between biology and AI" is an interesting contrast with the constant use of the evolution analogy despite credible challenges
+https://twitter.com/ESYudkowsky/status/1738464784931025333
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+
+What if, in addition to physical punishments and Detect Thoughts, Cheliax also had Adjust Thoughts, a "gradient descent for the brain" spell (given a desired behavior, nudge the spell target's psychology to be more likely to emit that behavior)? Does Carissa still have a winning strategy? Assume whatever implementation details make for a good story. (Maybe Cheliax is reluctant to use Adjust Thoughts too much because Asmodeus wants authentic tyrannized humans, and the Adjust Thoughts sculpting makes them less tyrannized?)
+
+> One thing is sure, the path that leads to sanity and survival doesn't start with lies or with reasoning by Appeal to (Internal) Consequences.
+https://twitter.com/ESYudkowsky/status/1743522277835333865