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index 39ba69c..4f9846e 100644
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@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ slotted TODO blocks—
 ✓ Dolphin War finish
 ✓ lead-in to Sept. 2021 Twitter altercation
 ✓ out of patience email
-- Michael Vassar and the Theory of Optimal Gossip
+✓ Michael Vassar and the Theory of Optimal Gossip
 _ plan to reach out to Rick / Michael on creepy men/crazy men
 _ State of Steven
 _ reaction to Ziz
@@ -53,6 +53,7 @@ _ do I have a better identifier than "Vassarite"?
 _ maybe I do want to fill in a few more details about the Sasha disaster, conditional on what I end up writing regarding Scott's prosecution?—and conditional on my separate retro email—also the Zolpidem thing
 _ mention "Darkest Timeline" and Skyrms somewhere
 _ footnote explaining quibbles? (the first time I tried to write this, I hesitated, not sure if necessary)
+_ "it was the same thing here"—most readers are not going to understand what I see as the obvious analogy
 
 pt. 4 edit tier—
 _ mention Nick Bostrom email scandal (and his not appearing on the one-sentence CAIS statement)
@@ -297,7 +298,7 @@ people to consult before publishing, for feedback or right of objection—
 _ Iceman
 _ Scott
 _ hostile prereader (April—if not, J. Beshir, Swimmer, someone else from Alicorner #drama)
-_ Kelsey
+_ Kelsey (what was that 1 year statute of limitations about??)
 _ NRx Twitter bro
 _ maybe SK (briefly about his name)? (the memoir might have the opposite problem (too long) from my hostile-shorthand Twitter snipes)
 _ Megan (that poem could easily be about some other entomologist named Megan) ... I'm probably going to cut that §, though