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@@ -6,21 +6,27 @@ time-sensitive globals TODOs—
 ✓ apply pro edits to pt. 3
 ✓ address auto edit tier to pt. 3
 ✓ clear with Alicorn
-- fill in needed pt. 4 sections
-_ send pt. 4 to editors
-_ consult Anna
-_ clear with Steven
+✓ fill in needed pt. 4 sections
+✓ send pt. 4 to editors
+
 - rephrase "everyone-yelling operation" in pt. 5
 _ rephrase "trans kids on the margin" section: https://luminousalicorn.tumblr.com/post/702114588699820032/what-exactly-are-the-tell-tale-signs-of-a-3-year
-_ clear with Kelsey
 _ finish and ship "Reply to Scott on Autogenderphilia"
 _ finish and ship "Hrunkner Unnerby"
+
+_ consult Anna
+_ clear with Steven
+_ clear with Kelsey
 _ clear with Michael/Ben/Jessica
 _ consult Said
 _ clear with Ray
 _ clear with Ruby
+
 _ SHIP PT. 3!!
 ------------
+
+_ finish pt. 5
+
 _ apply red team pt. 4
 _ apply pro edit pt. 4
 
@@ -31,6 +37,7 @@ _ apply red team pt. 5
 _ apply pro edit pt. 5
 
 _ consult lc
+_ consult David Xu
 _ psychiatric disaster private doc
 
 
@@ -49,6 +56,7 @@ pt. 3 edit tier (auto edition)—
 ✓ "Common Interest of Many Causes" and "Kolmogorov Complicity" offer directly contradictory strategies
 ✓ re-check wording of trans-kids-on-the-margin section
 _ briefly speculate on causes of brain damage in footnote?
+_ "consensus behavior" anti-school complaint could be stronger
 ----
 _ Ruby fight included ban threat, "forces of blandness want me gone ... stand my ground" remark
 _ breakup song
@@ -89,7 +97,7 @@ _ cite more sneers; use a footnote to pack in as many as possible
 
 
 pt. 5 edit tier—
-_ sucking Scott's dick is helpful because he's now the main gateway instead of HPMOR
+✓ sucking Scott's dick is helpful because he's now the main gateway instead of HPMOR
 _ Previously-on summary
 _ graf about Christiano could use a rewrite
 _ Dolphin War: after "never been published", insert "still citing it" graf
@@ -130,6 +138,8 @@ _ "Riley" pointing out that it worked better because it was Oli
 _ mention Michael's influence and South Park recs in late 2016?
 _ GreaterWrong over Less Wrong for comment links
 _ "List of Lethalities" mentioning quantilizers + https://twitter.com/ESYudkowsky/status/1301958048911560704 + https://twitter.com/paulfchristiano/status/1301992757007847425
+_ screenshot Xu thread
+
 
 things to discuss with Michael/Ben/Jessica—
 _ Anna on Paul Graham
@@ -141,7 +151,7 @@ _ revision of "yelling" description
 _ Michael's SLAPP against REACH (new)
 _ Michael on creepy and crazy men (new)
 _ elided Sasha disaster (new)
-_ what should I say to Iceman?
+_ what should I say to Iceman? https://twitter.com/satisfiesvalues/status/1730025195413410129
 _ reached out to Garrison Lovely