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@@ -22,14 +22,14 @@ pt. 3 edit tier—
 ✓ mention "Darkest Timeline" and Skyrms somewhere
 
 pt. 3 content fills—
-_ the skeptical family friend's view
-_ in a footnote, defend the "cutting my dick off" rhetorical flourish
+✓ the skeptical family friend's view
+✓ in a footnote, defend the "cutting my dick off" rhetorical flourish
+_ confusing people and ourselves about what the exact crime is
 _ footnote explaining quibbles on clarification
-_ "Not the Incentives"—rewrite given that I'm not shielding Ray
-_ I still mostly feel like being more detailed than "fraud"; later thoughts on jump to evaluation, translating between different groups' language
 _ FTX validated Ben's view of EA!!
 
 pt. 3 minor—
+✓ "Not the Incentives"—rewrite given that I'm not shielding Ray
 _ Ben on "locally coherent coordination": use direct quotes for Ben's language—maybe rewrite in my own language (footnote?) as an understanding test
 _ do I have a better identifier than "Vassarite"?
 _ maybe I do want to fill in a few more details about the Sasha disaster, conditional on what I end up writing regarding Scott's prosecution?—and conditional on my separate retro email—also the Zolpidem thing