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diff --git a/notes/memoir-sections.md b/notes/memoir-sections.md
index 1ee692f..6071e07 100644
--- a/notes/memoir-sections.md
+++ b/notes/memoir-sections.md
@@ -23,11 +23,12 @@ _ final credit assignment ritual
 _ phenotypic capture and memetic identity (insert into pt. 1)
 
 pre-edit phase—
-_ footnote about "density of outright falsehoods"
 _ security code drama?? ("Although, speaking of documenting" 2 March)
 _ integrate 5150 scene scraps into a coherent section
 
 near editing tier—
+_ link Crossdreamers (at the same time I say it's not about the clothes, to help make sense of the title)
+_ so embarrassed after the Singularity
 _ "Patient's Rights" or "Patients' Rights"?
 _ mention my "trembling hand" history with secrets, not just that I don't like it
 _ NRx explanation should include the "there's only what won" line
@@ -35,21 +36,24 @@ _ It's not clear anyone he usually respects was making this mistake; it seems li
 _ mention flying to Pittsburgh had been brought up
 _ Noether's theorem allusion re "... Boundaries?"
 
+
 people to consult specifically before pt. 1–3:
 _ hostile prereader? (first-choice: April) 
 _ professional editor?
 
+Needed for pt. 1—
+- "Thomas" [pt. 1-2]
 _ Tail (AGP discussion) [pt. 1]
-_ "Thomas" [blanket]
+_ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation) [pt. 1-3]
+_ Sophia [pt. 1-2]
 _ Anna [blanket]
-_ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation) [blanket]
-_ Ben/Jessica (Michael) [blanket]
+
+Needed for pt. 2–3—
 _ Scott [blanket]
+_ Ben/Jessica (Michael) [pt. 2-]
 _ Divia? (ask if she wants to be mentioned?) [blanket]
-_ "Bill" [blanket]
-_ Sophia [pt. 1-2]
-
-_ "Roberta" [pt. 2]
+_ "Bill" [pt. 3-]
+_ "Roberta"? [pt. 2]
 _ Alicorn: briefly, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link [pt. 2-3]
 _ "Noreen" [pt. 2]
 _ Lex [pt. 2]
@@ -58,7 +62,7 @@ _ "Rebecca" (consent, pseudonym choice) [pt. 2, not before 15 June]
 
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-from the top editing session— bookmark phrase "A trans woman named Sophia"
+from the top editing session— bookmark phrase "The thing about being psychiatrically"
 
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@@ -82,6 +86,8 @@ _ Dolphin War finish
 ------
 
 With internet available—
+_ define ersatz
+_ link to my Facebook post for Coming Out Day
 _ "All You Zombies"
 _ links to PA hospitals
 _ link to my Facebook posts on Azkaban, prematuring conceding the bet, and correcting the bet record
@@ -2656,3 +2662,4 @@ my moral compass puts me to the right of the politically vocal tech nerds, espec
 (There had been a moment during my psych imprisonment the other month, when I had noticeable diffculty dialing a phone. I was still a _person_, even when not all of my usual cognitive abilities were online.)
 
 The fact that I ghosted on music lessons from "Tricky" for being nonbinary, is an example of phenotypic capture ruining everything
+