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diff --git a/notes/memoir-sections.md b/notes/memoir-sections.md
index 67db4c9..6071e07 100644
--- a/notes/memoir-sections.md
+++ b/notes/memoir-sections.md
@@ -23,7 +23,6 @@ _ final credit assignment ritual
 _ phenotypic capture and memetic identity (insert into pt. 1)
 
 pre-edit phase—
-_ footnote about "density of outright falsehoods"
 _ security code drama?? ("Although, speaking of documenting" 2 March)
 _ integrate 5150 scene scraps into a coherent section
 
@@ -42,16 +41,18 @@ people to consult specifically before pt. 1–3:
 _ hostile prereader? (first-choice: April) 
 _ professional editor?
 
+Needed for pt. 1—
+- "Thomas" [pt. 1-2]
 _ Tail (AGP discussion) [pt. 1]
-- "Thomas" [blanket]
+_ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation) [pt. 1-3]
+_ Sophia [pt. 1-2]
 _ Anna [blanket]
-_ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation) [blanket]
-_ Ben/Jessica (Michael) [blanket]
+
+Needed for pt. 2–3—
 _ Scott [blanket]
+_ Ben/Jessica (Michael) [pt. 2-]
 _ Divia? (ask if she wants to be mentioned?) [blanket]
-_ "Bill" [blanket]
-_ Sophia [pt. 1-2]
-
+_ "Bill" [pt. 3-]
 _ "Roberta"? [pt. 2]
 _ Alicorn: briefly, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link [pt. 2-3]
 _ "Noreen" [pt. 2]
@@ -61,7 +62,7 @@ _ "Rebecca" (consent, pseudonym choice) [pt. 2, not before 15 June]
 
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-from the top editing session— bookmark phrase "In a Facebook thread"
+from the top editing session— bookmark phrase "The thing about being psychiatrically"
 
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@@ -85,6 +86,7 @@ _ Dolphin War finish
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 With internet available—
+_ define ersatz
 _ link to my Facebook post for Coming Out Day
 _ "All You Zombies"
 _ links to PA hospitals