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@@ -7,7 +7,8 @@ slotted TODO blocks—
 ✓ out of patience email
 ✓ Michael Vassar and the Theory of Optimal Gossip
 ✓ complicity and friendship
-_ plan to reach out to Rick / Michael on creepy men/crazy men
+✓ plan to reach out to "Ethan"
+✓ Michael on creepy men/crazy men
 _ State of Steven
 _ reaction to Ziz
 _ repair pt. 5 dath ilan transition
@@ -54,6 +55,7 @@ _ maybe I do want to fill in a few more details about the Sasha disaster, condit
 _ mention "Darkest Timeline" and Skyrms somewhere
 _ footnote explaining quibbles? (the first time I tried to write this, I hesitated, not sure if necessary)
 _ "it was the same thing here"—most readers are not going to understand what I see as the obvious analogy
+_ first mention of Jack G. should introduce him properly
 
 pt. 4 edit tier—
 _ mention Nick Bostrom email scandal (and his not appearing on the one-sentence CAIS statement)
@@ -87,6 +89,7 @@ things to discuss with Michael/Ben/Jessica—
 _ Anna on Paul Graham
 _ compression of Yudkowsky thinking reasoning wasn't useful
 _ Michael's SLAPP against REACH
+_ Michael on creepy and crazy men
 
 
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