X-Git-Url: http://unremediatedgender.space/source?a=blobdiff_plain;f=notes%2Fmemoir-sections.md;h=8db8bfec5b4213480b120477ff3dd2c497f0c284;hb=ada71e9c29102f4160620dd4bfd1b70ed4af3ebf;hp=67db4c9750a1a5cfa6bd0d8e39f0c4a728822aeb;hpb=b24e5e1efa5e09fdbef88acd2e030525dc6915fe;p=Ultimately_Untrue_Thought.git diff --git a/notes/memoir-sections.md b/notes/memoir-sections.md index 67db4c9..8db8bfe 100644 --- a/notes/memoir-sections.md +++ b/notes/memoir-sections.md @@ -1,68 +1,33 @@ -TODO finish before I can vet and ship pt.s 1–3 ---------------- -✓ "People ..." introduction -✓ finish existing 5150 scene scraps -✓ CCRMC facility note -✓ footnote about telephone game of "self present" -✓ interacting with the outpatient program -✓ Vassar discourse I -✓ community health check -✓ Vassar discourse II -✓ ordering DIY hormones -✓ asking Anna for promise -✓ Vassar discourse III -✓ proposed credit-assignment ritual -✓ emailing Blanchard/Bailey/Hsu/Lawrence/Cantor/Dreger -✓ tie-off -✓ "Roberta" situation -_ overheating in April, staying at Volterra, Hamilton purchase -_ BABSCon -_ "my call with Western Psychiatric's Manager of Patient Relations" -_ final credit assignment ritual - -_ phenotypic capture and memetic identity (insert into pt. 1) - -pre-edit phase— -_ footnote about "density of outright falsehoods" -_ security code drama?? ("Although, speaking of documenting" 2 March) -_ integrate 5150 scene scraps into a coherent section +_ "A Hill" edit sweep (bookmark phrase: "") near editing tier— -_ link Crossdreamers (at the same time I say it's not about the clothes, to help make sense of the title) +_ explain the title _ so embarrassed after the Singularity -_ "Patient's Rights" or "Patients' Rights"? _ mention my "trembling hand" history with secrets, not just that I don't like it _ NRx explanation should include the "there's only what won" line _ It's not clear anyone he usually respects was making this mistake; it seems likely that the original thread was subtweeting Eric Weinstein, who was not making this mistake -_ mention flying to Pittsburgh had been brought up +_ explain that "A Human's Guide to Words" / 37 Ways are the same text _ Noether's theorem allusion re "... Boundaries?" people to consult specifically before pt. 1–3: _ hostile prereader? (first-choice: April) -_ professional editor? +- professional editor +Needed for pt. 1-2— +- "Thomas" _ Tail (AGP discussion) [pt. 1] -- "Thomas" [blanket] +_ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation) [pt. 1-3] +_ Sophia [pt. 1-2] _ Anna [blanket] -_ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation) [blanket] -_ Ben/Jessica (Michael) [blanket] _ Scott [blanket] -_ Divia? (ask if she wants to be mentioned?) [blanket] -_ "Bill" [blanket] -_ Sophia [pt. 1-2] - -_ "Roberta"? [pt. 2] +_ Ben/Jessica (Michael) [pt. 2-] +_ "Bill" [pt. 3-] _ Alicorn: briefly, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link [pt. 2-3] _ "Noreen" [pt. 2] -_ Lex [pt. 2] _ "Rebecca" (consent, pseudonym choice) [pt. 2, not before 15 June] --------------- - -from the top editing session— bookmark phrase "In a Facebook thread" - ---------------- _ "Lenore" psychiatric disaster @@ -85,6 +50,7 @@ _ Dolphin War finish ------ With internet available— +_ define ersatz _ link to my Facebook post for Coming Out Day _ "All You Zombies" _ links to PA hospitals @@ -2646,7 +2612,7 @@ activists who want to change society are both incentivized and self-selected for me— > It looks like my social circle. (This is why I'm worried about suboptimal social norms getting locked in for the wrong reasons—what's fashionable in Berkeley in year X is likely to be mainstream in year X+20.) -in the hotel room, Michael got up to go to the bathroom, I thought the noise was specifically timed to prevent me from hearing something that I shouldn't + [something perfectly innocent about math and dolphins](https://www.lesswrong.com/posts/esRZaPXSHgWzyB2NL/where-to-draw-the-boundaries) that wouldn't have seemed remotely controversial in 2009, and therefore, by [Noether's theorem](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Noether%27s_theorem#Time_invariance), can't be remotely controversial in 2019 @@ -2661,3 +2627,9 @@ my moral compass puts me to the right of the politically vocal tech nerds, espec The fact that I ghosted on music lessons from "Tricky" for being nonbinary, is an example of phenotypic capture ruining everything + +https://twitter.com/ESYudkowsky/status/1668419201101615105 + +> As usual, I got there first and solved the relatively easy philosophy problems, so the sensible people have nothing to talk about, and the unsensible ones can't just use my answer sheet. + +(I thought about apologizing if some of the content was "weird" or offensive, but I figured if you've been a professional editor for 15 years and list memoirs as a specialty, you've probably seen everything.)