X-Git-Url: http://unremediatedgender.space/source?a=blobdiff_plain;f=notes%2Fmemoir-sections.md;h=8db8bfec5b4213480b120477ff3dd2c497f0c284;hb=ada71e9c29102f4160620dd4bfd1b70ed4af3ebf;hp=f2b77364eb4356371dcc0f4f233bec55c5c8612b;hpb=781f5bdaaf89544a79a43d2839f588e3fd1b853b;p=Ultimately_Untrue_Thought.git diff --git a/notes/memoir-sections.md b/notes/memoir-sections.md index f2b7736..8db8bfe 100644 --- a/notes/memoir-sections.md +++ b/notes/memoir-sections.md @@ -1,58 +1,32 @@ -TODO finish before I can vet and ship pt.s 1–3 ---------------- -✓ "People ..." introduction -✓ finish existing 5150 scene scraps -✓ CCRMC facility note -✓ footnote about telephone game of "self present" -✓ interacting with the outpatient program -✓ Vassar discourse I -✓ community health check -✓ Vassar discourse II -✓ ordering DIY hormones -✓ asking Anna for promise -✓ Vassar discourse III -✓ proposed credit-assignment ritual -✓ emailing Blanchard/Bailey/Hsu/Lawrence/Cantor/Dreger -✓ tie-off -- "Roberta" situation -_ overheating in April, staying at Volterra, Hamilton purchase -_ BABSCon -_ "my call with Western Psychiatric's Manager of Patient Relations" -_ final credit assignment ritual - -_ phenotypic capture and memetic identity (insert into pt. 1) - -pre-edit phase— -_ footnote about "density of outright falsehoods" -_ security code drama?? ("Although, speaking of documenting" 2 March) -_ integrate 5150 scene scraps into a coherent section +_ "A Hill" edit sweep (bookmark phrase: "") near editing tier— -_ "maximize the number of trans ppl" conversation should briefly sample the guy's bogus conjunction of arguments +_ explain the title +_ so embarrassed after the Singularity _ mention my "trembling hand" history with secrets, not just that I don't like it _ NRx explanation should include the "there's only what won" line _ It's not clear anyone he usually respects was making this mistake; it seems likely that the original thread was subtweeting Eric Weinstein, who was not making this mistake -_ explain who Michael Bailey is earlier +_ explain that "A Human's Guide to Words" / 37 Ways are the same text +_ Noether's theorem allusion re "... Boundaries?" -people to consult specifically before pt. 1–3: -_ Tail (AGP discussion) -_ "Thomas" (privacy negotiations) -_ Anna -_ "Noreen" -_ "Bill" -_ "Rebecca" (consent, pseudonym choice) -_ Alicorn: briefly, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link -_ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation) -_ Ben/Jessica (Michael) -_ Scott -_ Lex -_ Divia? (ask if she wants to be mentioned?) -_ hostile prereader? (first-choice: April) -_ professional editor? --------------- +people to consult specifically before pt. 1–3: +_ hostile prereader? (first-choice: April) +- professional editor + +Needed for pt. 1-2— +- "Thomas" +_ Tail (AGP discussion) [pt. 1] +_ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation) [pt. 1-3] +_ Sophia [pt. 1-2] +_ Anna [blanket] +_ Scott [blanket] +_ Ben/Jessica (Michael) [pt. 2-] +_ "Bill" [pt. 3-] +_ Alicorn: briefly, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link [pt. 2-3] +_ "Noreen" [pt. 2] +_ "Rebecca" (consent, pseudonym choice) [pt. 2, not before 15 June] -from the top editing session— bookmark phrase "At this point, any _normal people_" ---------------- @@ -76,19 +50,16 @@ _ Dolphin War finish ------ With internet available— -_ Trump and Brexit and the summer of George Floyd +_ define ersatz +_ link to my Facebook post for Coming Out Day +_ "All You Zombies" _ links to PA hospitals _ link to my Facebook posts on Azkaban, prematuring conceding the bet, and correcting the bet record -_ Scott on "right to waive your rights" and wrongful committment _ what did the comments on my Pittsburg/Azkaban post say? -_ double-check https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Feminist_views_on_transgender_topics#Trans-exclusionary_radical_feminists_(TERFs) link -_ gauche (I almost feel like it should be italicized as a foreign word?) _ check that the Feb. Blanchard Tweet is the one with the screenshot-quote -_ look up Blanchard's h-index _ link to Kevin Hsu and James Cantor _ Is http://www.overcomingbias.com/2011/01/be-a-charity-angel.html the best link for after-the-fact prize funding? _ P(doom) -_ find the part of _Stranger in a Strange Land_ with the AGP telepathy!! _ Michael on OB in 'aught-eight on smart kids internalizing rules meant for the norm of reaction of a dumber population _ Tweet from Dreger _ when were Meeker Four out on bail? how long would they otherwise be held? @@ -2641,11 +2612,24 @@ activists who want to change society are both incentivized and self-selected for me— > It looks like my social circle. (This is why I'm worried about suboptimal social norms getting locked in for the wrong reasons—what's fashionable in Berkeley in year X is likely to be mainstream in year X+20.) -in the hotel room, Michael got up to go to the bathroom, I thought the noise was specifically timed to prevent me from hearing something that I shouldn't -[something perfectly innocent about math and dolphins](https://www.lesswrong.com/posts/esRZaPXSHgWzyB2NL/where-to-draw-the-boundaries) that wouldn't have seemed remotely controversial in 2009, and therefore, by [Noether's theorem](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Noether%27s_theorem#Time_invariance), can't be remotely controversial in 2019, as long as energy is conserved. + +[something perfectly innocent about math and dolphins](https://www.lesswrong.com/posts/esRZaPXSHgWzyB2NL/where-to-draw-the-boundaries) that wouldn't have seemed remotely controversial in 2009, and therefore, by [Noether's theorem](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Noether%27s_theorem#Time_invariance), can't be remotely controversial in 2019 + +as long as energy is conserved. I conflated "feminist" with the kind of woman I want https://status451.com/2017/11/05/i-see-trad-people/ -my moral compass puts me to the right of the politically vocal tech nerds, especially the more androgynous type of tech nerd \ No newline at end of file +my moral compass puts me to the right of the politically vocal tech nerds, especially the more androgynous type of tech nerd + +(There had been a moment during my psych imprisonment the other month, when I had noticeable diffculty dialing a phone. I was still a _person_, even when not all of my usual cognitive abilities were online.) + +The fact that I ghosted on music lessons from "Tricky" for being nonbinary, is an example of phenotypic capture ruining everything + + +https://twitter.com/ESYudkowsky/status/1668419201101615105 + +> As usual, I got there first and solved the relatively easy philosophy problems, so the sensible people have nothing to talk about, and the unsensible ones can't just use my answer sheet. + +(I thought about apologizing if some of the content was "weird" or offensive, but I figured if you've been a professional editor for 15 years and list memoirs as a specialty, you've probably seen everything.)