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@@ -1,39 +1,10 @@
-TODO finish before I can vet and ship pt.s 1–3
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-✓ "People ..." introduction
-✓ finish existing 5150 scene scraps
-✓ CCRMC facility note
-✓ footnote about telephone game of "self present"
-✓ interacting with the outpatient program
-✓ Vassar discourse I
-✓ community health check
-✓ Vassar discourse II
-✓ ordering DIY hormones
-✓ asking Anna for promise
-✓ Vassar discourse III
-✓ proposed credit-assignment ritual
-✓ emailing Blanchard/Bailey/Hsu/Lawrence/Cantor/Dreger
-✓ tie-off
-✓ "Roberta" situation
-_ overheating in April, staying at Volterra, Hamilton purchase
-_ BABSCon
-_ "my call with Western Psychiatric's Manager of Patient Relations"
-_ final credit assignment ritual
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-_ phenotypic capture and memetic identity (insert into pt. 1)
-
-pre-edit phase—
-_ security code drama?? ("Although, speaking of documenting" 2 March)
-_ integrate 5150 scene scraps into a coherent section
+_ tie off 
 
 near editing tier—
-_ link Crossdreamers (at the same time I say it's not about the clothes, to help make sense of the title)
 _ so embarrassed after the Singularity
-_ "Patient's Rights" or "Patients' Rights"?
 _ mention my "trembling hand" history with secrets, not just that I don't like it
 _ NRx explanation should include the "there's only what won" line
 _ It's not clear anyone he usually respects was making this mistake; it seems likely that the original thread was subtweeting Eric Weinstein, who was not making this mistake
-_ mention flying to Pittsburgh had been brought up
 _ Noether's theorem allusion re "... Boundaries?"
 
 
@@ -56,13 +27,12 @@ _ "Bill" [pt. 3-]
 _ "Roberta"? [pt. 2]
 _ Alicorn: briefly, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link [pt. 2-3]
 _ "Noreen" [pt. 2]
-_ Lex [pt. 2]
 _ "Rebecca" (consent, pseudonym choice) [pt. 2, not before 15 June]
 
 
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-from the top editing session— bookmark phrase "The thing about being psychiatrically"
+"A Hill" editing sweeep bookmark phrase: ""
 
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