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@@ -6,21 +6,30 @@ time-sensitive globals TODOs—
 ✓ apply pro edits to pt. 3
 ✓ address auto edit tier to pt. 3
 ✓ clear with Alicorn
-- fill in needed pt. 4 sections
-_ send pt. 4 to editors
-_ consult Anna
-_ clear with Steven
-- rephrase "everyone-yelling operation" in pt. 5
-_ rephrase "trans kids on the margin" section: https://luminousalicorn.tumblr.com/post/702114588699820032/what-exactly-are-the-tell-tale-signs-of-a-3-year
-_ clear with Kelsey
+✓ fill in needed pt. 4 sections
+✓ send pt. 4 to editors
+✓ clear with Kelsey
+✓ rephrase "everyone-yelling operation" in pt. 5
+✓ clear with Michael/Ben/Jessica
+✓ Kelsey won't elaborate on statutes of limitations
+✓ clear with Steven
+✓ revise gender section
+✓ finish and ship "Hrunkner Unnerby"
+
+- consult Anna
+- revise FTX footnote
+- consult Said
+
 _ finish and ship "Reply to Scott on Autogenderphilia"
-_ finish and ship "Hrunkner Unnerby"
-_ clear with Michael/Ben/Jessica
-_ consult Said
+
 _ clear with Ray
 _ clear with Ruby
+
 _ SHIP PT. 3!!
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+
+_ finish pt. 5
+
 _ apply red team pt. 4
 _ apply pro edit pt. 4
 
@@ -30,7 +39,16 @@ _ solicit pro edit pt. 5
 _ apply red team pt. 5
 _ apply pro edit pt. 5
 
+✓ consult Tail
+
+_ bully Jeff Ladish
+_ #drama strategy session
+
+_ Manifold: Will Yudkowsky reply to "Agreeing With Stalin in Ways That Exhibit Generally Rationalist Principles" in a way that a 2008 Overcoming Bias reader would consider non-evasive, as judged by Vaniver?
+
+_ ask Jimrandomh about attack times
 _ consult lc
+_ consult David Xu
 _ psychiatric disaster private doc
 
 
@@ -49,7 +67,8 @@ pt. 3 edit tier (auto edition)—
 ✓ "Common Interest of Many Causes" and "Kolmogorov Complicity" offer directly contradictory strategies
 ✓ re-check wording of trans-kids-on-the-margin section
 _ briefly speculate on causes of brain damage in footnote?
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+_ "consensus behavior" anti-school complaint could be stronger
+-------
 _ Ruby fight included ban threat, "forces of blandness want me gone ... stand my ground" remark
 _ breakup song
 _ being friends with dogs (it's good, but do I have the wordcount budget?)
@@ -89,7 +108,7 @@ _ cite more sneers; use a footnote to pack in as many as possible
 
 
 pt. 5 edit tier—
-_ sucking Scott's dick is helpful because he's now the main gateway instead of HPMOR
+✓ sucking Scott's dick is helpful because he's now the main gateway instead of HPMOR
 _ Previously-on summary
 _ graf about Christiano could use a rewrite
 _ Dolphin War: after "never been published", insert "still citing it" graf
@@ -130,20 +149,21 @@ _ "Riley" pointing out that it worked better because it was Oli
 _ mention Michael's influence and South Park recs in late 2016?
 _ GreaterWrong over Less Wrong for comment links
 _ "List of Lethalities" mentioning quantilizers + https://twitter.com/ESYudkowsky/status/1301958048911560704 + https://twitter.com/paulfchristiano/status/1301992757007847425
-
-things to discuss with Michael/Ben/Jessica—
-_ Anna on Paul Graham
-_ Yudkowsky thinking reasoning wasn't useful
-_ Jessica brought up race & IQ (she skimmed the previous draft, so I should highlight), or calling Ruby a MOP
-_ Ben publish "Discursive Warfare and Faction Formation" doc?
-_ footnote about FTX
-_ revision of "yelling" description
-_ Michael's SLAPP against REACH (new)
-_ Michael on creepy and crazy men (new)
-_ elided Sasha disaster (new)
-_ what should I say to Iceman?
-_ reached out to Garrison Lovely
-
+_ screenshot Xu thread
+
+
+Vassar et al.—
+✓ "What You Can't Say"
+✓ reached out to Garrison Lovely
+✓ Michael on creepy and crazy men (new)
+✓ Michael's SLAPP against REACH (new)
+✓ elided Sasha disaster (new)
+✓ Ben publish "Discursive Warfare and Faction Formation" doc?
+✓ Yudkowsky thinking reasoning wasn't useful
+✓ Jessica brought up race & IQ (she skimmed the previous draft, so I should highlight), or calling Ruby a MOP
+✓ what should I say to Iceman? https://twitter.com/satisfiesvalues/status/1730025195413410129
+✓ footnote about FTX
+✓ revision of "yelling" description
 
 
 pt. 3–5 prereaders—