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 first edit pass bookmark: "I got a chance to talk to"
 
-pt. 3 edit tier—
-✓ footnote on the bad-faith condition on "My Price for Joining"
-✓ footnote explaining quibbles on clarification
-✓ quote Yudkowsky's LW moderation policy
-✓ hint at "Yes Requires" objector being trans
-✓ quote Jack on timelines anxiety
-✓ clarify "A Lesson is Learned"
-- nuance and FTX epilogue
+time-sensitive globals TODOs—
+✓ address red team objections to pt. 3
+- apply pro edits to pt. 3
+- address auto edit tier to pt. 3
+_ schedule Friendship Day at Valinor
+_ consult Anna
+_ clear with Steven
+_ Jessica's dramapost § in pt. 5
+_ consult 93 about Jessica's dramapost §
+_ finish and ship "Reply to Scott on Autogenderphilia"
+_ finish and ship "Hrunkner Unnerby"
+_ psychiatric disaster private doc
+_ clear with Michael/Ben/Jessica
+_ clear with Alicorn
+_ clear with Kelsey
+_ clear with Ray
+_ clear with Ruby
+_ SHIP PT. 3!!
+------------
+_ address auto edit tier to pt. 4–5
+_ red team pt. 4–5
+_ pro edit pt. 4–5
+_ consult lc
+
+
+pt. 3 edit tier (auto edition)—
+✓ FTX aside footnote version
+✓ revert alphabet names (from 17638259f20)
+✓ narcissistic delusions
+✓ clarify that cheerful price history is with Anna specifically
+_ screenshot "pleading, snarky reply"
+_ GreaterWrong over Less Wrong for comment links
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+_ breakup song
+_ briefly speculate on causes of brain damage (tie in to moderation policy?)
 _ being friends with dogs (it's good, but do I have the wordcount budget?)
-_ briefly speculate on causes of brain damage
 _ Ruby fight: "forces of blandness want me gone ... stand my ground" remark
 _ mention that I was miffed about "Boundaries?" not getting Curated, while one of Euk's animal posts did
 _ explicitly mention http://benjaminrosshoffman.com/bad-faith-behavior-not-feeling/
@@ -28,8 +53,6 @@ _ better explanation of MOPs in "Social Reality" scuffle (editor might catch?)
 _ better context on "scam" &c. earlier (editor might catch?)
 _ cut words from descriptions of other posts! (editor might catch?)
 _ try to clarify Abram's categories view (Michael didn't get it) (but it still seems clear to me on re-read?)
-_ screenshot "pleading, snarky reply"
-_ GreaterWrong over Less Wrong for comment links
 
 pt. 4 edit tier—
 ✓ "Ideology Is Not the Movement" mentions not misgendering
@@ -94,7 +117,8 @@ things to discuss with Michael/Ben/Jessica—
 _ Anna on Paul Graham
 _ Yudkowsky thinking reasoning wasn't useful
 _ Jessica brought up race & IQ (she skimmed the previous draft, so I should highlight this)
-_ FTX and nuance epilogue (new)
+_ Ben publish "Discursive Warfare and Faction Formation" doc?
+_ quick note about FTX
 _ Michael's SLAPP against REACH (new)
 _ Michael on creepy and crazy men (new)
 _ elided Sasha disaster (new)
@@ -2809,7 +2833,6 @@ I don't, actually, expect people to spontaneously blurt out everything they beli
 
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 Michael said that we didn't want to police Eliezer's behavior, but just note that something had seemingly changed and move on. "There are a lot of people who can be usefully informed about the change," Michael said. "Not him though."
 
 That was the part I couldn't understand, the part I couldn't accept.