X-Git-Url: http://unremediatedgender.space/source?a=blobdiff_plain;f=notes%2Fmemoir-sections.md;h=cce86b92ad28a100d1aa8c2c9dbcf2f00b8f8dc4;hb=d42c35c8cc7cdf12b5c78e0080b7ddd51836e13a;hp=d945d9f99d6778fd8f41ecae7fd14fbc4cb3379c;hpb=4a3546607448301285ad91ee2c0b2f78412e76de;p=Ultimately_Untrue_Thought.git diff --git a/notes/memoir-sections.md b/notes/memoir-sections.md index d945d9f..cce86b9 100644 --- a/notes/memoir-sections.md +++ b/notes/memoir-sections.md @@ -1,17 +1,17 @@ first edit pass bookmark: "I got a chance to talk to" time-sensitive globals TODOs— -- apply pro edits to pt. 3 (waiting on remaining parts) -- address red team objections to pt. 3 +✓ address red team objections to pt. 3 +- apply pro edits to pt. 3 - address auto edit tier to pt. 3 _ schedule Friendship Day at Valinor _ consult Anna -_ consult Said +_ clear with Steven _ Jessica's dramapost § in pt. 5 _ consult 93 about Jessica's dramapost § _ finish and ship "Reply to Scott on Autogenderphilia" _ finish and ship "Hrunkner Unnerby" -_ psychiatric disaster doc +_ psychiatric disaster private doc _ clear with Michael/Ben/Jessica _ clear with Alicorn _ clear with Kelsey @@ -22,31 +22,18 @@ _ SHIP PT. 3!! _ address auto edit tier to pt. 4–5 _ red team pt. 4–5 _ pro edit pt. 4–5 +_ consult lc -pt. 3 edit tier (red team edition)— -✓ extract these kinds of statements of political alignment as concessions -✓ credibly helpful unsolicited criticism -✓ male multivariate distribution -✓ reserve the right to lie -✓ how to be principled about the ways in which you're dishonest -✓ I don't think the group of gay men and lesbian -✓ narcissistic delusions (soften) -✓ ended up growing out of it (footnote the number?) -✓ harm I'm theorizing (model of the child) -✓ might be fictional (reword to not leak info) pt. 3 edit tier (auto edition)— -✓ footnote on the bad-faith condition on "My Price for Joining" -✓ footnote explaining quibbles on clarification -✓ quote Yudkowsky's LW moderation policy -✓ hint at "Yes Requires" objector being trans -✓ quote Jack on timelines anxiety -✓ clarify "A Lesson is Learned" -- explain the "jump to evaluation" failure -- FTX -_ where were all the trans kids 10 years ago? -_ clarify that cheerful price history is with Anna specifically +✓ FTX aside footnote version +✓ revert alphabet names (from 17638259f20) +✓ narcissistic delusions +✓ clarify that cheerful price history is with Anna specifically +_ screenshot "pleading, snarky reply" +_ GreaterWrong over Less Wrong for comment links ---- +_ breakup song _ briefly speculate on causes of brain damage (tie in to moderation policy?) _ being friends with dogs (it's good, but do I have the wordcount budget?) _ Ruby fight: "forces of blandness want me gone ... stand my ground" remark @@ -66,8 +53,6 @@ _ better explanation of MOPs in "Social Reality" scuffle (editor might catch?) _ better context on "scam" &c. earlier (editor might catch?) _ cut words from descriptions of other posts! (editor might catch?) _ try to clarify Abram's categories view (Michael didn't get it) (but it still seems clear to me on re-read?) -_ screenshot "pleading, snarky reply" -_ GreaterWrong over Less Wrong for comment links pt. 4 edit tier— ✓ "Ideology Is Not the Movement" mentions not misgendering @@ -133,7 +118,7 @@ _ Anna on Paul Graham _ Yudkowsky thinking reasoning wasn't useful _ Jessica brought up race & IQ (she skimmed the previous draft, so I should highlight this) _ Ben publish "Discursive Warfare and Faction Formation" doc? -_ FTX and nuance epilogue (new) +_ quick note about FTX _ Michael's SLAPP against REACH (new) _ Michael on creepy and crazy men (new) _ elided Sasha disaster (new) @@ -2848,7 +2833,6 @@ I don't, actually, expect people to spontaneously blurt out everything they beli ----- - Michael said that we didn't want to police Eliezer's behavior, but just note that something had seemingly changed and move on. "There are a lot of people who can be usefully informed about the change," Michael said. "Not him though." That was the part I couldn't understand, the part I couldn't accept.