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-Notes from pt. 3–6 readthrough (post publication of pt. 1–2)—
+slotted TODO blocks—
+✓ psychiatric disaster
+_ "Agreeing With Stalin" intro recap
+_ recap of crimes, cont'd
+_ Dolphin War finish
+_ lead-in to Sept. 2021 Twitter altercation
+_ Michael Vassar and the Theory of Optimal Gossip
+_ plan to reach out to Rick / Michael on creepy men/crazy men
+_ reaction to Ziz
+_ State of Steven
+_ complicity and friendship
+_ out of patience email
+- Eliezerfic fight conclusion
+
+blocks to fit somewhere—
+_ the hill he wants to die on (insert somewhere in "Standing")
+_ Tail vs. Bailey / Davis vs. Yudkowsky analogy (new block somewhere)
+_ mention that "Not Man for the Categories" keeps getting cited
+
+Notes from pt. 3 readthrough—
 _ fullname Taylor and Hoffman at start of pt. 3
 _ footnote clarifying that "Riley" and Sarah weren't core members of the group, despite being included on some emails?
 _ be more specific about Ben's anti-EA and Jessica's anti-MIRI things, perhaps in footnotes
@@ -26,6 +45,8 @@ _ we can go stronger than "I definitely don't think Yudkowsky _thinks of himself
 _ try to clarify Abram's categories view (Michael didn't get it)
 _ cut lots of words from December 2019 blogging spree
 _ in a footnote, defend the "cutting my dick off" rhetorical flourish
+
+Notes from pt. 4 readthrough—
 _ mention Nick Bostrom email scandal (and his not appearing on the one-sentence CAIS statement)
 _ revise and cut words from "bad faith" section since can link to "Assume Bad Faith"
 _ cut words from January 2020 Twitter exchange (after war criminal defenses)
@@ -34,27 +55,6 @@ _ cut lots of words from Scotts comments on Jessica's MIRI post (keep: "attempti
 _ do I have a better identifier than "Vassarite"?
 _ maybe I do want to fill in a few more details about the Sasha disaster, conditional on what I end up writing regarding Scott's prosecution?—and conditional on my separate retro email—also the Zolpidem thing
 
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-slotted TODO blocks—
-✓ psychiatric disaster
-_ "Agreeing With Stalin" intro recap
-_ recap of crimes, cont'd
-_ Dolphin War finish
-_ lead-in to Sept. 2021 Twitter altercation
-_ Michael Vassar and the Theory of Optimal Gossip
-_ plan to reach out to Rick / Michael on creepy men/crazy men
-_ reaction to Ziz
-_ State of Steven
-_ complicity and friendship
-_ out of patience email
-- Eliezerfic fight conclusion
-
-blocks to fit somewhere—
-_ the hill he wants to die on (insert somewhere in "Standing")
-_ Tail vs. Bailey / Davis vs. Yudkowsky analogy (new block somewhere)
-_ mention that "Not Man for the Categories" keeps getting cited
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