move the pt. 1/2 cutpoint down, and cut pt. 2!!

Okay, it was pretty dumb of me to spend so much extra time writing a
lot of words that I don't ultimately want to keep.

(I could end up polishing and publishing the full madness story
eventually, but I don't need it for the Whole Dumb Story that I'm
prioritizing as my lifework right now and want to make a big marketing
push for.)