outline support for "There's a Land ..."

diff --git a/content/drafts/theres-a-land-that-i-see-or-the-spirit-of-intervention.md b/content/drafts/theres-a-land-that-i-see-or-the-spirit-of-intervention.md
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@@ -47,3 +47,22 @@ Maybe [Good Is Dumb](http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/GoodIsDumb) does
 _I want to make the stupid dream real._ But to _get_ to the good world—whatever you think that is—
 
 ... you're going to have to bootstrap from _today's_, unremediated, genderspace. Which requires _understanding_ it first. 
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+OUTLINE OF POINTS TO HIT—
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+ * beautiful moral idea of equality  
+ * —makes people believe that group differences are superficial/fake/social
+ * but this is crazy because:
+    * is does not imply ought
+    * social vs. biological isn't even the axis you care about
+ * but, we also assume things are biological/fixed when that's convenient for
+   "minority" things we want to protect (sexual orientation, gender identity)
+ * requiring crazy beliefs in order to be a good person is a drain, a drag, and
+   a tax on sanity
+ * _be specific_ about what's gerrymandered and wrong about "sex diffs
+   real/gender identity not"
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+OTHER TODO—
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+ * coach points out that "after the revolution" could use rewording