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@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@ I cosplayed Rose Quartz at FanimeCon this year! It was fun, I think! I guess?
 I'm not really sure what other people get out of conventions. For me, it's my one
 
 
-(_I will fight for the place where I'm free_)
-(_I will fight for the world I was made in_)
+(_I will fight for the place where I'm free!_)
+(_I will fight for the world I was made in!_)
 
 
-(previously: as _Equestria Girls_ Twilight Sparkle at BABSCon 2018, as Ens. Silvia Tilly at SF Comic-Con 2018, [as Korra at San Francisco Comic-Con 2017](/2017/Oct/a-leaf-in-the-crosswind/), [as Pearl at FanimeCon 2017](http://zackmdavis.net/blog/2017/05/gems-will-be-gems/), as [Lt. Jadzia Dax (circa 2369) at the _Star Trek_ 50 Year Mission Tour San Francisco 2016](/2016/Dec/joined/), [as Pearl as San Francsico Comic-Con 2016](/2016/Sep/is-there-affirmative-action-for-incompetent-crossplay/))
+(previously: as Ens. Silvia Tilly at San Francisco Comic-Con 2018, as _Equestria Girls_ Twilight Sparkle at BABSCon 2018, [as Korra at San Francisco Comic-Con 2017](/2017/Oct/a-leaf-in-the-crosswind/), [as Pearl at FanimeCon 2017](http://zackmdavis.net/blog/2017/05/gems-will-be-gems/), as [Lt. Jadzia Dax (circa 2369) at the _Star Trek_ 50 Year Mission Tour San Francisco 2016](/2016/Dec/joined/), [as Pearl as San Francsico Comic-Con 2016](/2016/Sep/is-there-affirmative-action-for-incompetent-crossplay/))