X-Git-Url: http://unremediatedgender.space/source?p=Ultimately_Untrue_Thought.git;a=blobdiff_plain;f=content%2Fdrafts%2Fas-well-for-a-sheep-as-a-lamb.md;h=1fa8f76558589424ae1e5468578d1ec6765493d3;hp=4cd80e733d92216a76aeb4ac57ae5df7f329d796;hb=9838f46c488cc5d058c60b5fbd531b0f02ab82cd;hpb=2b8c08f37ef4b50ca53e093351119c5209073d5f

diff --git a/content/drafts/as-well-for-a-sheep-as-a-lamb.md b/content/drafts/as-well-for-a-sheep-as-a-lamb.md
index 4cd80e7..1fa8f76 100644
--- a/content/drafts/as-well-for-a-sheep-as-a-lamb.md
+++ b/content/drafts/as-well-for-a-sheep-as-a-lamb.md
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ status heirarchy: you're just a pervert, we're actually women; I want to flip th
 You can't spell narcisstic rage without cis.
 
 
-http://slatestarcodex.com/2014/11/04/ethnic-tension-and-meaningless-arguments/
+http://web.archive.org/web/20200618164529/https://slatestarcodex.com/2014/11/04/ethnic-tension-and-meaningless-arguments/
 
 my choosing to quit HRT makes me less legit
 
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ V. ROUGH OUTLINE OF POINTS TO HIT—
  * because there's moralistic pressure to be on the Blue Team, people who aren't willing to play that game anymore are tempted to just slap a negative sign on the Blue message
     * obviously, this is really bad
 
-MAIN PURPOSE OF THIS POST: An apology (both senses, probably) for the "cathartic" tag on my blog.
+MAIN PURPOSE OF THIS POST: An apology (both "an expression of remorse" and "a formal defense") for the "cathartic" tag on my blog.
 
 political spectra are dimensionality reductions