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 > —Sara Barellies, ["Gonna Get Over You"](https://genius.com/Sara-bareilles-gonna-get-over-you-lyrics)
 
-So, I _really_ wasn't doing so well for the five-month period between December and April.
+I really wasn't doing so well for the five-month period between December and April.
 
 Explaining this requires some context-setting.
 
@@ -89,12 +89,16 @@ There could be similarly egregious errors that I'm not as sensitive too
 
 I don't think you can build an aligned superintelligence from a culture this crazy
 
+it's not fair to expect ordinary people to understand the univariate fallacy before they're allowed to say "men aren't women"
+
 maybe S. was trying to talk about "legal fiction" categories, but I'm trying to talk about epistemology, and that's a probable reading when you say "categories"
 
 Hansonian mental illness that people should be less accomodating of
 
 there has to be a way to apply a finite amount of effort to _correct_ errors, and possibly even profit from correcting errors
 
+(I'm not making this up! I _couldn't_ make this up!)
+
 the frame in which I'm 
 
 outside view hobby-horse
@@ -109,4 +113,6 @@ free-speech norms
 
 I'll be alright. Just not tonight.
 
+maybe 50,000 years from now we'll all be galatic superminds and laugh about all this
+
 (probably tell the story with no external links, only this-blog links)