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 Tags: interlude, romance
 Status: draft
 
-"I think that if show any signs of [egghood](https://archive.is/pp6Sa), you _need_ to marry someone who's okay with you eventually transitioning. Not because you _necessarily_ will, but because it's _likely_ enough that you need to _plan_ for it."
+"I think if you show any indications of being an egg, you _need_ to marry someone who's OK with you eventually transitioning. Not because you necessarily _will_ want to transition, but because it's likely enough that you need to plan for it."
 
 "I probably don't actually _disagree_. Keeping promises is very important. What a betrayal it would be—to take someone to have and to hold, for better or for worse, for richer or for poorer, in sickness and in health—
 
@@ -14,4 +14,9 @@ But in the spirit of [Policy Debates Should Not Appear One-Sided](https://www.le
 
 "Eggs can have love, they just add a constraint."
 
+"I don't think you understand the seriousness of _just_ adding a constraint.
+
 "Constraint: must own unicorn."
+
+In [4]: 7 * 10**9 / (60 * 60 * 24 * 365)
+Out[4]: 221.9685438863521