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-Are trans women women? It depends on your decision criterion for applying the word _woman_ to something.
+Are trans women women? It depends on your decision criteria for applying the word _woman_ to something. (I say _decision criteria_ rather than _definition_ because [...])
 
 You've 
 
 Are women and men mostly similar, or mostly different?
 
 what counts as "similar" vs. "different" isn't scientifically interesting: the data speaks for itself; how you want to summarize the data to stupid humans who can't hold multivariate probability distributions in their head is a matter of politics
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+[make sure to explain how this is different from "Categories Were Made" sophistry]
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