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 The author probably doesn't believe in the typology (if she's even heard of it), but _the traits line up anyway_. Carrie is straight—gynephilic (["Guys just aren't my thing"](http://www.dolari.org/cs/16.htm), she tells her sister). Carrie's gay (androphilic) drag queen friend Victor/Victoria [doesn't understand Carrie's motivations](http://www.dolari.org/cs/67.htm): "Not to mention you don't _think_ like one of 'them'", she comments on Carrie's lack of innate femininity. (Anyone can see that effeminate gays taking on female roles "make sense"; autogynephilia is harder to understand if you haven't yourself felt the tug of the scintillating but ultimately untrue thought.) Heidi the (male) dominatrix [displays a working knowledge of the typology while coming on to Carrie](http://www.dolari.org/cs/268.htm): "We're both crossdressers, and we aren't anything like drag queens [...] sometimes I want to hang out with someone like me. Someone like you." Indeed!
 
+[TODO: "And I feel a longing" ... could she be more specific http://www.dolari.org/cs/231.htm]
+[TODO: pseudo-androphilia! http://www.dolari.org/cs/239.htm]
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+A point of skepticism on the premise: it doesn't feel realistic to me that Carrie passes _to Allison_, particularly given that Carrie is _not on hormones yet_.
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+"are those real" http://www.dolari.org/cs/340.htm
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+_Closetspace_ seems to be on life support—there have only been five updates since 2019. 
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-pseudo-androphilia! http://www.dolari.org/cs/239.htm
 
-"And I feel a longing" ... could she be more specific http://www.dolari.org/cs/231.htm
 
 
-[TODO—paragraph about passing—
-As a quibble about realism, I'm not sure how Carrie manages to pass _without HRT_.
 
 on passing—
 How does Carrie pass? No one mistakes Texas revolutionary woman for a man just because she has short hair and wears men's clothes http://www.dolari.org/cs/23.htm
@@ -72,12 +83,17 @@ grocery shopping http://www.dolari.org/cs/209.htm
 visit from niece/aunt http://www.dolari.org/cs/215.htm http://www.dolari.org/cs/216.htm
 "One small gene, all these problems from one tiny little gene" http://www.dolari.org/cs/231.htm
 "Chromosome" http://www.dolari.org/cs/232.htm (Actually, they're both right! The SRY gene is the active part of the Y chromosome)
-Allison is only three years in http://www.dolari.org/cs/317.htm
 "in Thailand, no questions asked" http://www.dolari.org/cs/320.htm
 ambiguity on what "Carrie" means!! (Carol vs. Carolyn this is actually relevant to me) http://www.dolari.org/cs/326.htm
 nine months http://www.dolari.org/cs/332.htm
 drag queens make Allison uncomfortable http://www.dolari.org/cs/253.htm http://www.dolari.org/cs/254.htm (Alison is committed to relative "stealth"; this isn't a "trans women are women" setting— )
 
+Timelines—
+Allison is only three years in http://www.dolari.org/cs/317.htm
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+but the world of the '90s/'aughts]
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 _Lease Bound_ is the story of