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+TODO (mostly from Tue 20 Feb WRITING COACH SESSION)—
+* expand on sticker wrongness
+* draft and inject new sentences/paragraphs on—
+  * Lewontin's fallacy/multidimensional intuition
+     * http://johnsalvatier.org/blog/2017/reality-has-a-surprising-amount-of-detail
+     * http://lesswrong.com/lw/xe/changing_emotions/
+  * it shouldn't be surprising to sciencey ppl that biology is real
+  * practical stakes (think of the children)
+  * nonbinary
+  * trans women are beautiful and great, but it's not the _same thing_
+
+/2017/Dec/theres-a-land-that-i-see-or-the-spirit-of-intervention/
+
+BUFFERED—
+* "fooled by hormones and surgery": reproduction
+* kind, just, respectful
+* one more evidence of Norton's confusion
+* coach's map example
+
+HARDER TO APPLY—
+* can function socially as men
+
+
+
 FULL OUTLINE—
 * Scott says category boundaries aren't true or false; you can group whales with other sea-dwelling animals if you want
 * Sure, this is a great motte
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 * the reason it _matters_ that people already have a concept for male because of the high-dimensionality, which my diagram can't express, but intution can
 * passing is _hard_
-* link http://johnsalvatier.org/blog/2017/reality-has-a-surprising-amount-of-detail
-* link http://lesswrong.com/lw/xe/changing_emotions/
 * the mismatch gets _worse_ with less gatekeeping
 * "gay" trans women are etiologically straight     
 * weird social taboos, stickers