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+pt. 4 edit tier—
+✓ "A Fire" § title
+_ revise the start of §6 to say he came by core pronoun stance honestly
+_ revise "too good a writer" to be more explicit "someone could be that naive"
+_ footnote about how I could be blamed for being too credulous
+_ say that explicitly, up front, at the start of that … chunk.
+_ edit post to clarify "nudging the cognition"
+_ revise start of §6 to say that
+_ look for a place to link "Faction formation"
+_ Tail's objection to FFS example
+_ Brennan "everyone else should participate" needs more wording adjustments
+_ the mailing list post noted it as a "common sexual fantasy"
+_ Sept. 2020 clarification noted that a distinction should be made between
+_ emphasize that 2018 thread was policing TERF-like pronoun usage, not just disapproving of gender-based pronouns
+_ https://cognition.cafe/p/on-lies-and-liars
+_ cite more sneers; use a footnote to pack in as many as possible
+_ Dawkins and Jerry Coyne and https://www.thefp.com/p/carole-hooven-why-i-left-harvard
 
 time-sensitive globals TODOs—
-_ rewrite pt. 4
-_ consult Anna
 ✓ consult Said
-_ publish pt. 4
+✓ patriate-links script TODOs
+_ remaining pt. 4 edit tier
+_ draft Twitter thread
+_ draft #drama strategy comments
+_ consult Anna
+_ #drama strategy session
+_ bully Jeff Ladish
+_ PUBLISH pt. 4!!
 
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 ✓ consult Tail
 
-_ bully Jeff Ladish
-_ #drama strategy session
 
 _ consult lc
 _ consult David Xu
 _ psychiatric disaster private doc
 
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-pt. 4 edit tier—
-_ say that explicitly, up front, at the start of that … chunk.
-_ edit post to clarify "nudging the cognition"
-_ look for a place to link "Faction formation"
-_ Tail's objection to FFS example
-_ the mailing list post noted it as a "common sexual fantasy"
-_ Sept. 2020 clarification noted that a distinction should be made between
-_ emphasize that 2018 thread was policing TERF-like pronoun usage, not just disapproving of gender-based pronouns
-_ https://cognition.cafe/p/on-lies-and-liars
-_ cite more sneers; use a footnote to pack in as many as possible
-_ Dawkins and Jerry Coyne and https://www.thefp.com/p/carole-hooven-why-i-left-harvard
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 pt. 5 edit tier—
 ✓ sucking Scott's dick is helpful because he's now the main gateway instead of HPMOR
 _ Previously-on summary