X-Git-Url: http://unremediatedgender.space/source?p=Ultimately_Untrue_Thought.git;a=blobdiff_plain;f=notes%2Fmemoir-sections.md;fp=notes%2Fmemoir-sections.md;h=ef52b13d44e3f7bd194ee48fd4fd8d41073018db;hp=f067e327d9a07b1cc6cecb9aa1aa83d6afb70d12;hb=92f9ee528fd56127161b43867750418d8fcbdfec;hpb=7bc920b52eb3640b7e23b3109ed2b9c24cfd8d27 diff --git a/notes/memoir-sections.md b/notes/memoir-sections.md index f067e32..ef52b13 100644 --- a/notes/memoir-sections.md +++ b/notes/memoir-sections.md @@ -1,27 +1,30 @@ pt. 4 edit tier— ✓ "A Fire" § title ✓ make sure I'm summarizing "policy debates" moral from "Challenges" -- revise "too good a writer" to be more explicit "someone could be that naive" -_ footnote about how I could be blamed for being too credulous? +✓ revise "too good a writer" to be more explicit "someone could be that naive" +- footnote about how I could be blamed for being too credulous? _ say that explicitly, up front, at the start of that … chunk. _ edit post to clarify "nudging the cognition" _ Tail's objection to FFS example _ Brennan "everyone else should participate" needs more wording adjustments -_ the mailing list post noted it as a "common sexual fantasy" _ Sept. 2020 clarification noted that a distinction should be made between _ emphasize that 2018 thread was policing TERF-like pronoun usage, not just disapproving of gender-based pronouns _ look for a place to link http://benjaminrosshoffman.com/discursive-warfare-and-faction-formation/ +_ parenthetical defending literal fraud? +----- +requires net— +_ the mailing list post noted it as a "common sexual fantasy" _ cite more sneers; use a footnote to pack in as many as possible _ Stephen Jay Gould _ Dawkins and Jerry Coyne and https://www.thefp.com/p/carole-hooven-why-i-left-harvard -_ parenthetical defending literal fraud? + time-sensitive globals TODOs— ✓ consult Said ✓ patriate-links script TODOs - remaining pt. 4 edit tier - draft #drama strategy opening remarks -_ consult Anna +- consult Anna _ #drama strategy session _ draft Twitter thread _ consult lc?