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-first edit pass bookmark: "I got a chance to talk to"
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 time-sensitive globals TODOs—
 ✓ address red team objections to pt. 3
 ✓ schedule Friendship Day at Valinor
@@ -17,24 +15,24 @@ time-sensitive globals TODOs—
 ✓ revise FTX footnote
 ✓ clear with Ray
 ✓ finish and ship "Reply to Scott on Autogenderphilia"
+✓ clear with Ruby
+✓ section headers for pt. 3
+✓ revise gender section!!
 
-- revise gender section
 - consult Anna
 - consult Said
-- clear with Ruby
-_ clear with Mike
-
+_ clear with Mike/re-clear with Alicorn
 
 _ SHIP PT. 3!!
 
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-_ finish pt. 5
-
+✓ apply pro edit pt. 4
+_ section headers for pt. 4
 _ apply red team pt. 4
-_ apply pro edit pt. 4
 
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+_ finish pt. 5
 _ address auto edit tier to pt. 5
 _ solicit red team pt. 5
 _ solicit pro edit pt. 5
@@ -76,7 +74,7 @@ _ breakup song
 _ being friends with dogs (it's good, but do I have the wordcount budget?)
 _ mention that I was miffed about "Boundaries?" not getting Curated, while one of Euk's animal posts did
 _ explicitly mention http://benjaminrosshoffman.com/bad-faith-behavior-not-feeling/
-_ meeting with Ray (maybe?)
+_ meeting with Ray (6/29)
 _ mention Said rigor check somewhere, nervousness about Michael's gang being a mini-egregore
 _ I should respond to Ziz's charges that my criticism of concept-policing was a form of concept-policing
 _ Anna's claim that Scott was a target specifically because he was good, my counterclaim that payment can't be impunity
@@ -102,6 +100,8 @@ pt. 4 edit tier—
 ✓ if you only say good things about Republican candidates
 ✓ he used to be worthy of trust
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+_ look for a place to link "Faction formation"
+_ Tail's objection to FFS example
 _ the mailing list post noted it as a "common sexual fantasy"
 _ Sept. 2020 clarification noted that a distinction should be made between
 _ emphasize that 2018 thread was policing TERF-like pronoun usage, not just disapproving of gender-based pronouns
@@ -2867,3 +2867,6 @@ The man rewrote had rewritten my personality over the internet. Everything I do,
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 https://forum.effectivealtruism.org/posts/kuqgJDPF6nfscSZsZ/thread-for-discussing-bostrom-s-email-and-apology?commentId=Z7kyiPAfmtztueFFJ
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