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 time-sensitive globals TODOs—
 ✓ address red team objections to pt. 3
-- apply pro edits to pt. 3
-- address auto edit tier to pt. 3
-_ schedule Friendship Day at Valinor
+✓ schedule Friendship Day at Valinor
+✓ apply pro edits to pt. 3
+✓ address auto edit tier to pt. 3
+- rephrase "everyone-yelling operation" in pt. 5
 _ consult Anna
 _ clear with Steven
-_ Jessica's dramapost § in pt. 5
-_ consult 93 about Jessica's dramapost §
 _ finish and ship "Reply to Scott on Autogenderphilia"
 _ finish and ship "Hrunkner Unnerby"
 _ psychiatric disaster private doc
@@ -30,24 +29,25 @@ pt. 3 edit tier (auto edition)—
 ✓ revert alphabet names (from 17638259f20)
 ✓ narcissistic delusions
 ✓ clarify that cheerful price history is with Anna specifically
-_ screenshot "pleading, snarky reply"
-_ GreaterWrong over Less Wrong for comment links
+✓ screenshot "pleading, snarky reply"
+✓ GreaterWrong over Less Wrong for comment links
+✓ return on cognitive investment
+✓ establish usage of "coordination group" vs. "posse" (posse)
+✓ do I have a better identifier than "Vassarite"
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+_ Ruby fight included ban threat, "forces of blandness want me gone ... stand my ground" remark
 _ breakup song
 _ briefly speculate on causes of brain damage (tie in to moderation policy?)
 _ being friends with dogs (it's good, but do I have the wordcount budget?)
-_ Ruby fight: "forces of blandness want me gone ... stand my ground" remark
 _ mention that I was miffed about "Boundaries?" not getting Curated, while one of Euk's animal posts did
 _ explicitly mention http://benjaminrosshoffman.com/bad-faith-behavior-not-feeling/
 _ meeting with Ray (maybe?)
 _ mention Said rigor check somewhere, nervousness about Michael's gang being a mini-egregore
 _ I should respond to Ziz's charges that my criticism of concept-policing was a form of concept-policing
 _ Anna's claim that Scott was a target specifically because he was good, my counterclaim that payment can't be impunity
-_ do I have a better identifier than "Vassarite"?
 _ maybe I do want to fill in a few more details about the Sasha disaster, conditional on what I end up writing regarding Scott's prosecution?—and conditional on my separate retro email—also the Zolpidem thing
 _ the "reducing negativity" post does obliquely hint at the regression point being general
 _ link to protest flyer
-_ establish usage of "coordination group" vs. "posse"? (editor might catch?)
 _ "it was the same thing here"—most readers are not going to see an obvious analogy (editor might catch?)
 _ better explanation of MOPs in "Social Reality" scuffle (editor might catch?)
 _ better context on "scam" &c. earlier (editor might catch?)
@@ -102,6 +102,7 @@ _ "Not Man for the Categories" keeps getting cited
 _ the hill he wants to die on
 _ humans have honor instead of TDT. "That's right! I'm appealing to your honor!"
 _ Leeroy Jenkins Option
+_ consult 93 about Jessica's dramapost §
 _ historical non-robot-cult rationality wisdom
 _ work in the "some clever gambit to play trans activists and gender-critical feminists against each other"
 _ finale: mention that I'm not doing the dumb reversed-stupidity thing
@@ -116,12 +117,15 @@ _ GreaterWrong over Less Wrong for comment links
 things to discuss with Michael/Ben/Jessica—
 _ Anna on Paul Graham
 _ Yudkowsky thinking reasoning wasn't useful
-_ Jessica brought up race & IQ (she skimmed the previous draft, so I should highlight this)
+_ Jessica brought up race & IQ (she skimmed the previous draft, so I should highlight), or calling Ruby a MOP
 _ Ben publish "Discursive Warfare and Faction Formation" doc?
-_ quick note about FTX
+_ footnote about FTX
+_ revision of "yelling" description
 _ Michael's SLAPP against REACH (new)
 _ Michael on creepy and crazy men (new)
 _ elided Sasha disaster (new)
+_ what should I say to Iceman?
+_ "yelling"
 
 
 pt. 3–5 prereaders—