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@@ -5,22 +5,22 @@ time-sensitive globals TODOs—
 ✓ schedule Friendship Day at Valinor
 ✓ apply pro edits to pt. 3
 ✓ address auto edit tier to pt. 3
-- rephrase "everyone-yelling operation" in pt. 5
+✓ clear with Alicorn
+- fill in needed pt. 4 sections
+_ send pt. 4 to editors
 _ consult Anna
 _ clear with Steven
+- rephrase "everyone-yelling operation" in pt. 5
+_ rephrase "trans kids on the margin" section: https://luminousalicorn.tumblr.com/post/702114588699820032/what-exactly-are-the-tell-tale-signs-of-a-3-year
+_ clear with Kelsey
 _ finish and ship "Reply to Scott on Autogenderphilia"
 _ finish and ship "Hrunkner Unnerby"
 _ clear with Michael/Ben/Jessica
-_ consult Said?
-_ clear with Alicorn
-_ clear with Kelsey
+_ consult Said
 _ clear with Ray
 _ clear with Ruby
 _ SHIP PT. 3!!
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-- address auto edit tier to pt. 4
-_ solicit red team pt. 4
-_ solicit pro edit pt. 4
 _ apply red team pt. 4
 _ apply pro edit pt. 4
 
@@ -78,8 +78,9 @@ pt. 4 edit tier—
 ✓ ending qualifications on "fraud" and whether it might be a good idea
 ✓ selective argumentation that's clearly labeled as such would be fine
 
-- if you only say good things about Republican candidates
+- if you only say good things about Republican candidates / Stalin's five year plan
 - he used to be worthy of trust
+_ the mailing list post noted it as a "common sexual fantasy"
 
 ---
 _ emphasize that 2018 thread was policing TERF-like pronoun usage, not just disapproving of gender-based pronouns
@@ -128,6 +129,7 @@ _ better explanation of Scott's jailbreaking accusation against Vassar
 _ "Riley" pointing out that it worked better because it was Oli
 _ mention Michael's influence and South Park recs in late 2016?
 _ GreaterWrong over Less Wrong for comment links
+_ "List of Lethalities" mentioning quantilizers + https://twitter.com/ESYudkowsky/status/1301958048911560704 + https://twitter.com/paulfchristiano/status/1301992757007847425
 
 things to discuss with Michael/Ben/Jessica—
 _ Anna on Paul Graham
@@ -140,6 +142,7 @@ _ Michael's SLAPP against REACH (new)
 _ Michael on creepy and crazy men (new)
 _ elided Sasha disaster (new)
 _ what should I say to Iceman?
+_ reached out to Garrison Lovely
 
 
 
@@ -178,6 +181,7 @@ _ psyops don't require people taking them seriously, only that they make people
 _ the reason "truth is better than lies; knowledge is better than ignorance" is general; can assert by authorial fiat whatever details are needed to make it all turn out for the greater good, but _that's not how anything works in real life_.
 _ "telling people things would be meddling" moral needs work; obvious objection is that different rules apply to Keepers
 _ "obligate" is only Word of God, right?—I should probably cite this
+_ damnatio memoriae is traditionally a punishment