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@@ -68,6 +68,7 @@ _ better context on "scam" &c. earlier (editor might catch?)
 _ cut words from descriptions of other posts! (editor might catch?)
 _ try to clarify Abram's categories view (Michael didn't get it) (but it still seems clear to me on re-read?)
 
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 pt. 4 edit tier—
 ✓ "Ideology Is Not the Movement" mentions not misgendering
 ✓ mention Nick Bostrom email scandal (and his not appearing on the one-sentence CAIS statement)
@@ -77,12 +78,11 @@ pt. 4 edit tier—
 ✓ GreaterWrong over Less Wrong for comment links
 ✓ ending qualifications on "fraud" and whether it might be a good idea
 ✓ selective argumentation that's clearly labeled as such would be fine
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-- if you only say good things about Republican candidates / Stalin's five year plan
-- he used to be worthy of trust
-_ the mailing list post noted it as a "common sexual fantasy"
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+✓ if you only say good things about Republican candidates
+✓ he used to be worthy of trust
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+_ the mailing list post noted it as a "common sexual fantasy"
+_ Sept. 2020 clarification noted that a distinction should be made between
 _ emphasize that 2018 thread was policing TERF-like pronoun usage, not just disapproving of gender-based pronouns
 _ https://cognition.cafe/p/on-lies-and-liars
 _ cite more sneers; use a footnote to pack in as many as possible