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 - "A Hill" edit sweep (bookmark phrase: "The language I spoke was")
 
 near editing tier—
+_ explain Michael's gaslighting charge, using the "bowels of Christ" language
 _ explain the title
 _ so embarrassed after the Singularity
 _ mention my "trembling hand" history with secrets, not just that I don't like it
-_ NRx explanation should include the "there's only what won" line
 _ It's not clear anyone he usually respects was making this mistake; it seems likely that the original thread was subtweeting Eric Weinstein, who was not making this mistake
 _ explain that "A Human's Guide to Words" / 37 Ways are the same text
 _ Noether's theorem allusion re "... Boundaries?"
 _ smooth out "still had his email" callback
 _ Caliphate / craft and the community
 _ explain back in the _Overcoming Bias_ era
-_ pt.1 end needs to mention BABSCon (back referenced)
+_ pt. 1 end should summarize missing part a little more
+_ pt. 1 end needs to mention BABSCon (back referenced)
+_ happy price subject line in pt. 1
 
 
 people to consult specifically before pt. 1–3:
-_ hostile prereader? (first-choice: April) 
+_ hostile prereader? (first-choice: April, )
 - professional editor
 
 Needed for pt. 1-2—
 - "Thomas"
 - Ben/Jessica (Michael) [pt. 2-]
-_ Tail (AGP discussion) [pt. 1]
+- Tail (AGP discussion) [pt. 1]
+- "Rebecca" (consent, pseudonym choice) [pt. 2, not before 15 June]
+
+to send—
+_ "Bill" [pt. 2-]
+_ Scott [blanket]
 _ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation) [pt. 1-2]
 _ Sophia [pt. 1]
 _ Anna [blanket]
-_ Scott [blanket]
-_ "Bill" [pt. 2-]
 _ Alicorn: briefly, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link [pt. 2]
 _ "Noreen" [pt. 2]
-_ "Rebecca" (consent, pseudonym choice) [pt. 2, not before 15 June]
+
 
 
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