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@@ -30,6 +30,8 @@ _ try to clarify Abram's categories view (Michael didn't get it) (but it still s
 _ GreaterWrong over Less Wrong for comment links
 
 pt. 4 edit tier—
+_ "tossed in a bucket" is ignoring advice from Sept. 2022 clarification to be clear about the type distinction
+_ "Ideology Is Not the Movement" mentions not misgendering
 _ body odors comment
 _ mention Nick Bostrom email scandal (and his not appearing on the one-sentence CAIS statement)
 _ if he wanted to, I'm sure Eliezer Yudkowsky could think of some relevant differences (I should explain)
@@ -43,7 +45,7 @@ _ when EY put a checkmark on my Discord message characterizing his strategy as g
 _ honesty and humility, HEXACO
 _ rephrase "gamete size" discussion to make it clearer that Yudkowsky's proposal also implicitly requires people to be agree about the clustering thing
 _ "Common Interest of Many Causes" and "Kolmogorov Complicity" offer directly contradictory strategies
-_ "tossed in a bucket" is ignoring advice from Sept. 2022 clarification to be clear about the type distinction
+_ GreaterWrong over Less Wrong for comment links
 
 pt. 5 edit tier—
 _ sucking Scott's dick is helpful because he's now the main gateway instead of HPMOR
@@ -51,6 +53,7 @@ _ Previously-on summary
 _ graf about Christiano could use a rewrite
 _ Dolphin War: after "never been published", insert "still citing it" graf
 _ Dolphin War: simplify sentence structure around "by cherry-picking the features"
+_ "Density in Thingspace" comment in Dolphin War https://www.greaterwrong.com/posts/d5NyJ2Lf6N22AD9PB/where-to-draw-the-boundary
 _ quote specific exchange where I mentioned 10,000 words of philosophy that Scott was wrong—obviously the wrong play
 _ Meghan Murphy got it down to four words
 _ Dolphin War needs more Twitter links: "as Soares pointed out" needs link, "threw an eleven-Tweet tantrum" (probably screenshot), tussling
@@ -82,6 +85,7 @@ _ explain the "if the world were at stake" Sword of Good reference better
 _ better explanation of Scott's jailbreaking accusation against Vassar
 _ "Riley" pointing out that it worked better because it was Oli
 _ mention Michael's influence and South Park recs in late 2016?
+_ GreaterWrong over Less Wrong for comment links
 
 
 things to discuss with Michael/Ben/Jessica—