"Fake Deeply" edits and tweak ending again
authorZack M. Davis <ultimatelyuntruethought@gmail.com>
Wed, 20 Sep 2023 18:58:37 +0000 (11:58 -0700)
committerZack M. Davis <ultimatelyuntruethought@gmail.com>
Thu, 21 Sep 2023 03:25:02 +0000 (20:25 -0700)
commit06c0c4dbee208b3403d44b39a9f927c85ad15d1f
tree346ce36516a970d20b6006be8b3e9c7c3e49d0e7
parentd5e7eef8d4e47c778c6a0e58407b04744a3d9526
"Fake Deeply" edits and tweak ending again

There's something to the complaint that this is a bad story because
nothing happens in it, but I can turn the screws on our protagonist a
tiny bit by at least having the antagonist ask about storage. Other
than that, it's plausible that I should just shove this out the door
(pending hostile/non-technical prereader review).
content/drafts/fake-deeply.md