shepherd dialogue coherence

diff --git a/content/2017/grim-trigger-or-the-parable-of-the-honest-man-and-the-god-of-marketing.md b/content/2017/grim-trigger-or-the-parable-of-the-honest-man-and-the-god-of-marketing.md
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--- a/content/2017/grim-trigger-or-the-parable-of-the-honest-man-and-the-god-of-marketing.md
+++ b/content/2017/grim-trigger-or-the-parable-of-the-honest-man-and-the-god-of-marketing.md
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ And the God of Marketing said, "You wouldn't."
 
 And the honest man said, "Defect!" And he blew the whistle.
 
-And a shepherd of the tribe of Matof rushed up to the honest man! And the shepherd said, "I think it's kinder not to tell anyone they're wrong, in the signaling sense, about bloodline understanding."
+And a shepherd of the tribe of Matof rushed up to the honest man! And the shepherd said, "I think it's kinder not to tell anyone they're wrong about their bloodline."
 
 And the honest man said, "Defect!"