From 5a60417fe5277cbce6fc8043ec1f7074ce1f89d4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "M. Taylor Saotome-Westlake" Date: Thu, 27 Oct 2016 20:12:17 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 1/1] don't editorialize so much in "Introductions" --- content/2016/introductions.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/content/2016/introductions.md b/content/2016/introductions.md index 3501ed8..7c8a044 100644 --- a/content/2016/introductions.md +++ b/content/2016/introductions.md @@ -6,10 +6,10 @@ Category: fiction "Pleased to meet you," she says. -"Pleased to meet you," I say. "You're very tall," I add awkwardly. +"Pleased to meet you," I say. "You're very tall," I add. "Thanks, I get that a lot," she says. "What's your shirt about?" -I look down at myself, to be reminded to my chagrin that today is the day I chose to wear my new custom "LATE-ONSET GENDER DYSPHORIA IN MALES IS NOT AN INTERSEX CONDITION, YOU LYING BASTARDS" T-shirt. +I look down at myself, to be reminded that today is the day I chose to wear my new custom "LATE-ONSET GENDER DYSPHORIA IN MALES IS NOT AN INTERSEX CONDITION, YOU LYING BASTARDS" T-shirt. "Oh, that's the name of my favorite rock group," I say. "They're from Canada. You probably haven't heard of them." -- 2.17.1