With internet available—
+_ elaborate on why I'm not leaking sensitive bits, by explaining what can be inferred by what was and wasn't said in public
_ what is the dictionary definition of _gestalt_ (maybe link it?)
_ better examples from "Yes Requires the Possibility of No"
_ my comment about having changed my mind about "A Fable of Science and Politics"
far editing tier—
+_ footnote to explain why I always include the year with the month even though it could be inferred from context
_ make sure to quote Yudkowsky's LW moderation policy before calling back to it
_ tie off Anna's plot arc?
_ explain earlier that my practice of "throw money at things" also applied to my friendship with Anna
_ Scott
_ Anna
_ secret posse member
+_ Katie (pseudonym choice)
_ Alicorn: about privacy, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link
_ someone from Alicorner #drama as a hostile prereader (Swimmer?)
_ maybe Kelsey (very briefly, just about her name)?