first edit pass bookmark: "I got a chance to talk to"
-pt. 3 edit tier—
+pt. 3 edit tier (red team edition)—
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+pt. 3 edit tier (auto edition)—
✓ footnote on the bad-faith condition on "My Price for Joining"
✓ footnote explaining quibbles on clarification
✓ quote Yudkowsky's LW moderation policy
✓ quote Jack on timelines anxiety
✓ clarify "A Lesson is Learned"
- nuance and FTX epilogue
+_ clarify that cheerful price history is with Anna specifically
+_ briefly speculate on causes of brain damage (tie in to moderation policy?)
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_ being friends with dogs (it's good, but do I have the wordcount budget?)
-_ briefly speculate on causes of brain damage
_ Ruby fight: "forces of blandness want me gone ... stand my ground" remark
_ mention that I was miffed about "Boundaries?" not getting Curated, while one of Euk's animal posts did
_ explicitly mention http://benjaminrosshoffman.com/bad-faith-behavior-not-feeling/