+blocky sections corresponding to an "event"—
+_ Christmas party 2019
+_ wireheading his fiction subreddit
+
+_ Sasha disaster (dedicate a day?)
+_ the dolphin war (dedicate a day?)
+
+
+With internet available—
+_ Newtonmas
+_ link "Untitled" for Scott's anti-feminism
+_ my mother on "dolphins are intelligent"
+_ link to MIRIcult archive
+_ italics in _The Nation_ article quote?
+_ link "Hero Licensing" chapter of Inadequate Equilibria
+_ "not taking into account considerations" → rephrase to quote "God's dictionary"
+_ what time of day was my Christmas conversation with Scott?
+_ check links and date on the fiction subreddit wireheading
+_ when I ref'd Scott to Tailcalled, did I also suggest an opponent?—didn't copy-paste that part
+_ "Steve Sailer retweeted me today" (20 November 19)—which Tweet was it?
+_ "McCarthyist" should link to Moldbug on the "Brown Scare"
+_ check on wording of Yudkowsky's anti-Moldbug comment on LW
+_ my public objection to Yudkowsky's denunciation of NRx https://twitter.com/zackmdavis/status/1164259164819845120
+_ except when it's net bad to have concluded Y: https://www.greaterwrong.com/posts/BgEG9RZBtQMLGuqm7/[Error%20communicating%20with%20LW2%20server]/comment/LgLx6AD94c2odFxs4
+_ my history of sniping in Yudkowsky's mentions
+_ comments on "Self-Consciousness wants to make"
+_ Scott vs. Ben on Drowning Children
+_ Ray and D. Xu's comments on "The Incentives"
+_ "Causal vs. Social Reality"
+_ elaborate on why I'm not leaking sensitive bits, by explaining what can be inferred by what was and wasn't said in public
+_ what is the dictionary definition of _gestalt_ (maybe link it?)
+_ better examples from "Yes Requires the Possibility of No"
+_ my comment about having changed my mind about "A Fable of Science and Politics"
+_ me remarking to "Wilhelm" that I think I met Vanessa at Solstice once, commented on Greg Egan
+_ debate with Benquo and Jessicata
+_ more Yudkowsky Facebook comment screenshots
+_ "20% of the ones with penises" someone in the comments saying, "It is a woman's body", and Yudkowsky saying "duly corrected"
+_ that neuroscience paper backing the
+_ Prudentbot § from "Robust Cooperation" paper
+_ JDP on warrant and standing
+_ compile Categories references from the Dolphin War Twitter thread
+_ tussle with Ruby on "Causal vs. Social Reality"
+_ when did I ask Leon about getting easier tasks?
+_ examples of snarky comments about "the rationalists"
+_ 13th century word meanings
+_ weirdly hostile comments on "... Boundaries?"
+_ more examples of Yudkowsky's arrogance
+_ dath ilan conspiracy references
+
+
+far editing tier—
+_ footnote on "no one would even consider"
+_ post-Christmas conversation should do a better job of capturing the war, that Jessica thinks Scott is Bad for being a psychiatrist
+_ conversation with Scott should include the point where I'm trying to do AI theory
+_ Anna "everyone knows" we don't have free speech 2 Mar 2019, self-centeredness about which global goods matter
+_ footnote to explain why I always include the year with the month even though it could be inferred from context
+_ make sure to quote Yudkowsky's LW moderation policy before calling back to it
+_ tie off Anna's plot arc?
+_ explain earlier that my practice of "throw money at things" also applied to my friendship with Anna
+_ mention my robot cult history (I've been here since the late 'aughts)
+_ ask Anna what she meant by "soldiers in an ambulance"; I was going to write up an explanation for Ben, but I don't seem to remember
+_ quote one more "Hill of Meaning" Tweet emphasizing fact/policy distinction
+_ conversation with Ben about physical injuries (this is important because it explains where the "cut my dick off rhetoric" came from)
+_ context of his claim to not be taking a stand
+_ clarify "Merlin didn't like Vassar" example about Mike's name
+_ being friends with Anna desipite being political enemies (~May 2019)
+_ rephrase "gamete size" discussion to make it clearer that Yudkowsky's proposal also implicitly requires people to be agree about the clustering thing
+_ smoother transition between "deliberately ambiguous" and "was playing dumb"; I'm not being paranoid for attributing political motives to him, because he told us that he's doing it
+_ when I'm too close to verbatim-quoting someone's email, actually use a verbatim quote and put it in quotes
+_ I'm sure Eliezer Yudkowsky could think of some relevant differences
+_ clarify why Michael thought Scott was "gaslighting" me, include "beeseech bowels of Christ"
+_ address the "maybe it's good to be called names" point from "Hill" thread
+_ explain "court ruling" earlier
+_ 2019 Discord discourse with Alicorner
+_ edit discussion of "anti-trans" side given that I later emphasize that "sides" shouldn't be a thing
+_ explain the adversarial pressure on privacy norms
+_ first EY contact was asking for public clarification or "I am being silenced" (so Glomarizing over "unsatisfying response" or no response isn't leaking anything Yudkowksy cares about)
+_ Nov. 2018 continues thread from Oct. 2016 conversation
+_ better explanation of posse formation
+_ maybe quote Michael's Nov 2018 texts?
+_ clarify sequence of outreach attempts
+_ clarify existence of a shadow posse member
+_ mention Nov. 2018 conversation with Ian somehow; backref on bidding for attention again; subject line from Happy Price 2016
+_ Said on Yudkowsky's retreat to Facebook being bad for him
+_ erasing agency of Michael's friends, construed as a pawn
+_ mention the fact that Anna had always taken a "What You Can't Say" strategy
+_ when to use first _vs. last names
+_ explain why I'm not being charitable in 2018 thread analysis, that at the time, I thought it had to be a mistake
+_ January 2019 meeting with Ziz and Gwen
+_ better summary of Littman
+_ explain Rob
+_ edit the child transition section in a way that Kay Brown would be OK with, have a few sentences about Clever Hans before the wrap-up
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+
+terms to explain on first mention—
+_ "Caliphate"
+_ "rationalist"
+_ Center for Applied Rationality
+_ MIRI
+_ "egregore"
+
+
+people to consult before publishing, for feedback or right of objection—
+_ Iceman
+_ Ben/Jessica
+_ Scott
+_ Anna
+_ secret posse member
+_ Katie (pseudonym choice)
+_ Alicorn: about privacy, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link
+_ someone from Alicorner #drama as a hostile prereader (Swimmer?)
+_ maybe Kelsey (very briefly, just about her name)?
+_ maybe SK (briefly about his name)? (the memoir might have the opposite problem (too long) from my hostile-shorthand Twitter snipes)
+(maybe don't bother with Michael?)
+
+marketing—
+_ Twitter
+_ Facebook
+_ Less Wrong
+_ should I buy Twitter ads to increase reach??
+_ TheMotte.org
+
+things to bring up in consultation emails—
+_ dropping "and Scott" in Jessica's description of attacking narcissim
+_ I think it's OK to copy my friends' language from emails; plagiarism instincts
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