+with internet available—
+_ Quillette link placement in proton concession
+_ did that Reddit comment cite "Kelsey" or "TUOC"?
+_ quote from "Kolmogorov complicity" about everything being connected
+_ citation/explanation for saying "Peace be unto him"
+_ address the "maybe it's good to be called names" point from "Hill" thread
+_ quote part of the "Hill" thread emphasizing "it's a policy decision", not just "it's not lying", if there is one besides the "Aristotelian binary" Tweet
+_ quote "maybe as a matter of policy" secondary Tweet earlier before quote
+_ 2019 Discord discourse with Alicorner
+_ screenshot Rob's Facebook comment which I link
+_ compile Categories references from the Dolphin War
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+far editing tier—
+_ edit discussion of "anti-trans" side given that I later emphasize that "sides" shouldn't be a thing
+_ clarify why Michael thought Scott was "gaslighting" me, include "beeseech bowels of Christ"
+_ the right way to explain how I'm respecting Yudkowsky's privacy
+_ explain the adversarial pressure on privacy norms
+_ first EY contact was asking for public clarification or "I am being silenced" (so Glomarizing over "unsatisfying response" or no response isn't leaking anything Yudkowksy cares about)
+_ Nov. 2018 continues thread from Oct. 2016 conversation
+_ better explanation of posse formation
+_ maybe quote Michael's Nov 2018 texts?
+_ clarify sequence of outreach attempts
+_ clarify existence of a shadow posse member
+_ mention Nov. 2018 conversation with Ian somehow
+_ Said on Yudkowsky's retreat to Facebook being bad for him
+_ explain first use of "rationalist"
+_ explain first use of Center for Applied Rationality
+_ erasing agency of Michael's friends, construed as a pawn
+_ chat with "Wilhelm" during March 2019 minor psych episode
+_ mention the fact that Anna had always taken a "What You Can't Say" strategy
+_ when to use first _vs. last names
+_ explain why I'm not being charitable in 2018 thread analysis, that at the time, I thought it had to be a mistake
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+people to consult before publishing, for feedback or right of objection—
+_ Iceman
+_ Ben/Jessica
+_ Scott
+_ Anna
+_ secret posse member
+_ someone from Alicorner #drama as a hostile prereader (Swimmer?)
+_ maybe Kelsey (very briefly, just about her name)?
+_ maybe SK (briefly about his name)?
+(probably don't bother with Michael?)
+
+things to bring up in consultation emails—
+_ dropping "and Scott" in Jessica's description of attacking narcissim
+_ I think it's OK to copy my friend's language from emails; plagiarism instincts
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