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@@ -23,11 +23,12 @@ _ final credit assignment ritual
 _ phenotypic capture and memetic identity (insert into pt. 1)
 
 pre-edit phase—
 _ phenotypic capture and memetic identity (insert into pt. 1)
 
 pre-edit phase—

-_ footnote about "density of outright falsehoods"

 _ security code drama?? ("Although, speaking of documenting" 2 March)
 _ integrate 5150 scene scraps into a coherent section
 
 near editing tier—
 _ security code drama?? ("Although, speaking of documenting" 2 March)
 _ integrate 5150 scene scraps into a coherent section
 
 near editing tier—

+_ link Crossdreamers (at the same time I say it's not about the clothes, to help make sense of the title)
+_ so embarrassed after the Singularity

 _ "Patient's Rights" or "Patients' Rights"?
 _ mention my "trembling hand" history with secrets, not just that I don't like it
 _ NRx explanation should include the "there's only what won" line
 _ "Patient's Rights" or "Patients' Rights"?
 _ mention my "trembling hand" history with secrets, not just that I don't like it
 _ NRx explanation should include the "there's only what won" line


@@ -35,21 +36,24 @@ _ It's not clear anyone he usually respects was making this mistake; it seems li
 _ mention flying to Pittsburgh had been brought up
 _ Noether's theorem allusion re "... Boundaries?"
 
 _ mention flying to Pittsburgh had been brought up
 _ Noether's theorem allusion re "... Boundaries?"
 

+

 people to consult specifically before pt. 1–3:
 _ hostile prereader? (first-choice: April) 
 _ professional editor?
 
 people to consult specifically before pt. 1–3:
 _ hostile prereader? (first-choice: April) 
 _ professional editor?
 

+Needed for pt. 1—
+- "Thomas" [pt. 1-2]

 _ Tail (AGP discussion) [pt. 1]
 _ Tail (AGP discussion) [pt. 1]

-_ "Thomas" [blanket]
+_ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation) [pt. 1-3]
+_ Sophia [pt. 1-2]

 _ Anna [blanket]
 _ Anna [blanket]

-_ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation) [blanket]
-_ Ben/Jessica (Michael) [blanket]
+
+Needed for pt. 2–3—

 _ Scott [blanket]
 _ Scott [blanket]

+_ Ben/Jessica (Michael) [pt. 2-]

 _ Divia? (ask if she wants to be mentioned?) [blanket]
 _ Divia? (ask if she wants to be mentioned?) [blanket]

-_ "Bill" [blanket]
-_ Sophia [pt. 1-2]
-
-_ "Roberta" [pt. 2]
+_ "Bill" [pt. 3-]
+_ "Roberta"? [pt. 2]

 _ Alicorn: briefly, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link [pt. 2-3]
 _ "Noreen" [pt. 2]
 _ Lex [pt. 2]
 _ Alicorn: briefly, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link [pt. 2-3]
 _ "Noreen" [pt. 2]
 _ Lex [pt. 2]


@@ -58,7 +62,7 @@ _ "Rebecca" (consent, pseudonym choice) [pt. 2, not before 15 June]
 
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-from the top editing session— bookmark phrase "A trans woman named Sophia"
+from the top editing session— bookmark phrase "The thing about being psychiatrically"

 
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@@ -82,22 +86,16 @@ _ Dolphin War finish
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 With internet available—
 ------
 
 With internet available—

-_ link specifically to Sophia's comment on "Wicked Transcendence"
-_ "(to some controversy)" link
-_ what is an "encyclical"
-_ Trump and Brexit and the summer of George Floyd link?
+_ define ersatz
+_ link to my Facebook post for Coming Out Day
+_ "All You Zombies"

 _ links to PA hospitals
 _ link to my Facebook posts on Azkaban, prematuring conceding the bet, and correcting the bet record
 _ links to PA hospitals
 _ link to my Facebook posts on Azkaban, prematuring conceding the bet, and correcting the bet record

-_ Scott on "right to waive your rights" and wrongful committment

 _ what did the comments on my Pittsburg/Azkaban post say?
 _ what did the comments on my Pittsburg/Azkaban post say?

-_ double-check https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Feminist_views_on_transgender_topics#Trans-exclusionary_radical_feminists_(TERFs) link
-_ gauche (I almost feel like it should be italicized as a foreign word?)

 _ check that the Feb. Blanchard Tweet is the one with the screenshot-quote
 _ check that the Feb. Blanchard Tweet is the one with the screenshot-quote

-_ look up Blanchard's h-index

 _ link to Kevin Hsu and James Cantor
 _ Is http://www.overcomingbias.com/2011/01/be-a-charity-angel.html the best link for after-the-fact prize funding?
 _ P(doom)
 _ link to Kevin Hsu and James Cantor
 _ Is http://www.overcomingbias.com/2011/01/be-a-charity-angel.html the best link for after-the-fact prize funding?
 _ P(doom)

-_ find the part of _Stranger in a Strange Land_ with the AGP telepathy!!

 _ Michael on OB in 'aught-eight on smart kids internalizing rules meant for the norm of reaction of a dumber population
 _ Tweet from Dreger
 _ when were Meeker Four out on bail? how long would they otherwise be held?
 _ Michael on OB in 'aught-eight on smart kids internalizing rules meant for the norm of reaction of a dumber population
 _ Tweet from Dreger
 _ when were Meeker Four out on bail? how long would they otherwise be held?


@@ -2662,3 +2660,6 @@ https://status451.com/2017/11/05/i-see-trad-people/
 my moral compass puts me to the right of the politically vocal tech nerds, especially the more androgynous type of tech nerd
 
 (There had been a moment during my psych imprisonment the other month, when I had noticeable diffculty dialing a phone. I was still a _person_, even when not all of my usual cognitive abilities were online.)
 my moral compass puts me to the right of the politically vocal tech nerds, especially the more androgynous type of tech nerd
 
 (There had been a moment during my psych imprisonment the other month, when I had noticeable diffculty dialing a phone. I was still a _person_, even when not all of my usual cognitive abilities were online.)

+
+The fact that I ghosted on music lessons from "Tricky" for being nonbinary, is an example of phenotypic capture ruining everything
+